Rascal

Ding, dang darn: this still lacks the almighty possession. And don't quit your day job.

Beautifully written, it leaves me feeling ponderous yet calm and contented. A joy to read and a captivating opening.10

i dont' have 8 names.... i thougth she liked my rewrite :( i'm going to cry

Hi there! I'm an Apteryx. A wingless bird with hairy feathers! How may I be of assistance?

hey.. thanks everyone for the corrections and such, including suggestions and grammar notations.. very helpful.

I, unfortunately, am not the powers that be. Otherwise I'd hand you your poetryc diploma and kick your fucking ass off poemranker!!!!

Maybe this should have been a paper airplane.

Nice to see someone you can't fault. that must be hard ofr you having to admit that. I liked the directness of this poem though it was sweet.

lol.. nice. hey, btw are you going to point me to the url of that manly p hall essay or what? I mean, i hate being teased and cheated out of an interesting read.

For those who think editing and defensiveness are below them. Read on, notice how our hero P&k does not act defensive, nor is he in need of an edit ever. He just Lol's a lot, and is hardly commiserative.

<<hard work and incessant cigarette smoking will get you through just about any situation in Hollywood >> _____________________________________________________ Well you've finally said something I agree with!

Reading this was like wading through glue.

But sweet Thom, I didn't say it? Poet & Knowit did.

Obsolete and utterly pointless, for someone who reveres themselves as a good writer this is about as memorable as a pot noodle.

Sometimes words stung together are simply words strung together. Why is it we must see every bad idea that comes to you when you are high? Your writing is going nowhere. Stan Rice is DEAD!

The only image here is the last one and it is a cliche. The word strike could be more precise.

"They even planned my funeral." Jesus christ you stupid bitch, didn't i tell you before that me and horus didnt plan it, it was simply a sudden thing that HAPPENED. Fucking crazy whore acts as if it was a godforsakened conspiracy to destroy her bipolar dynasty..

worker(s)!

Wednesdays are darker.