joe-joe, when you found god, where did you find him?

"Call it a mother's bargain--" or intuition? Last line is yummilicious!

I remember being 3rd best once. There for a day and then I was gone. Happiest and saddest moment of my life so far. Says something about my 'life'!

Touche, mon ami, mon frere. '... find that tether between men and my wild stance' ' I roar for your warm blood' ' covering your death face...' very good, excellent. Last Stanza I love, especially as an ending. Good structure. What's " 'ntil " I've never seen that before?

Very, Very, Well Done. This Poem Took some Talent. -10-

Are you another person inexplicably drawn to the workings of other peoples mandible muscles? Not that I am, of course. I mean that's worse than touching kids. Nice image though

connect the absinthe for me, to something more than paris, and wild thoughts. and wherefore england? (sheesh, i am demanding!)

I got ripped off as a kid. I got a crooked mullet and a Dio pin on a Motley Crue bandana. Teen idols come and go but Elvis is the King forever. Costello, that is. By the way you spell for shit, really. Great sentiment, poor typing.

very skillful to manage a vilanelle with the lines 'Nathalie, riding, found the boy, dead' and 'The coyote, startled, had run on ahead.'

why don't you ever put flesh on these bones? words are sumptuous, voluptuous, seductive. but you miser them away--have you a horde hidden somewhere, and will you spill it, someday?

nice idea well executed. Can't agree about seaweed having to have its existence permitted though

Put the model plane fuel down, and turn on some A/C. Because, my friend, you wouldn't know a Bagel baking Jew from a nazi stormtrooper in a dragster. Fuck, you're so out to lunch it's just a matter of time before you invent a new nerf sport and leave the squalor of blue collar purgatory behind and beome a rolemodel for those that missed the Emnm bandwagon.

parks or sparks? or arcs? hmmm. Regardless, well assembled symbols and motivation here.

So you are not the real PBOD, PBOD is just a kind of puppet you use. A gay puppet, you are not gay the puppet is. Right I think I get it now.

Nice work, pooftah!

hmm, I remember mikius writing a similer one, but he's got rid of it now. Its better anyway.

tres bien!

some nice lines, a bit schizophrenic skipping from one line to the next without reference to any central theme. the simple rhyming is not really needed the structure is good as it is

smart, well sewn

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