Re: Celui by half.italian	half.italian 76.172.249.205	11-Feb-07/10:27 AM
Have at it.
regarding some deleted poem...	half.italian 76.172.249.205	11-Feb-07/10:31 AM
nice!
Re: Fuck Shelters, & fuck OutReach Court. by SupremeDreamer	half.italian 76.172.249.205	11-Feb-07/10:39 AM
yikes.
Re: Let's praise great Britannia's golden days of now and then by Edna Sweetlove	Shuushin 65.175.177.241	11-Feb-07/9:18 PM
blah - who cares about this nationalistic shite.
Re: A Tragic Love Tryst In The Park Near The Sewage Works by Edna Sweetlove	Shuushin 65.175.177.241	11-Feb-07/9:19 PM
more drivel - well crafted, but really - why bother. it's like gold-plating dog shit.
regarding some deleted poem...	Shuushin 65.175.177.241	11-Feb-07/9:20 PM
also drivel.
Re: Celui by half.italian	Bethy 165.154.46.24	12-Feb-07/6:39 AM
sexy...good memory... :) Bethy
Re: Captured by Dovina	Bethy 165.154.46.24	12-Feb-07/6:46 AM
Short of sounding like a Coke or Pepsi add, There's Nothing Like The Real Thing Baby! lol, Good Good Good !!! Bethy:)
Re: Ode to a Pimple-Lyric Spawned by Phalkon's Greasy Face. by SupremeDreamer	Bethy 165.154.46.24	12-Feb-07/6:53 AM
My vote...I wish to be very very dead; I love this...simple serious... Bethy :)
Re: a days journey by donmiguel1960	Bethy 165.154.46.24	12-Feb-07/6:58 AM
I love the word "befuddled" its how I wake up some days...usually when I can't find clean socks, or my agenda...either or...it is a real feeling... Bethy:)
regarding some deleted poem...	Bethy 165.154.46.24	12-Feb-07/7:09 AM
God Bless Tiny...if this is what you remember at four...then so-be-it...I feel like a junky when I read your poetry...even your comments deserve ranking... :) :) :) Bethy
regarding some deleted poem...	Bethy 165.154.46.24	12-Feb-07/7:17 AM
Wow! This is a fav...I love it when my mind goes on a brief vacation, when my eyes are closed :) Bethy
Re: Captured by Dovina	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	12-Feb-07/8:42 AM
Dovina I have just soiled my brand new spats.
Re: The Ballad of Andy Thomas (A True Story) by Rakesh Rajani	Bethy 165.154.46.103	12-Feb-07/9:58 AM
A true story? WOW! I think we all have gone to school with an "Andy" Sad but a good poem/story. :) Bethy
regarding some deleted poem...	richa 81.179.135.216	12-Feb-07/9:59 AM
Don't you mean SWF.
Re: Captured by Dovina	richa 81.179.135.216	12-Feb-07/10:05 AM
It's ok. The whole little paw entices strong hand idea is relatively interesting. It's just I don't know kind of icky.
Re: self-suffocation by Phalkon	richa 81.179.135.216	12-Feb-07/10:07 AM
and your English teacher just laughed. :(
Re: A Cautionary Tale by Tman	richa 81.179.135.216	12-Feb-07/10:16 AM
I don't think it works putting your rhyming words on a seperate line. It makes the poem sound like Father Ted's 'my lovely horse'. Also sleep does not fill one's head.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 75.82.86.162	12-Feb-07/10:41 AM
Good flow and driving story. No diversions – that’s good. “This is wrong” – a line that might be self-questioning, especially with your “moralistic” comment, but could mean just “ineffective methods.” It’s good to leave that open. Well done.
regarding some deleted poem...	Ranger 81.103.124.179	12-Feb-07/11:45 AM
Why the flaming devil has no-one commented on this yet? You need to insult more people, it seems. This is a work of true vision and beauty, such devotion has rarely been seen on these light blue pages. Actually I'd quite like the metre to be played around with - the first line is oh so catchy, follow it up with a couple of short blasts and then return to a lengthier beat. You're getting a ten though and I will not give less -10-