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on an exit into limbo by libby_28
29 Jul 2003, 12:01 AM
Not to shabby.
The reason why god gave men the hunter's nose.
An appropriated dusking.
"The rocking back-and-forth of the boat" might flow better. "The tingling sensation in your nose of new smells" "This is good, isnât it?" "What life is really made of."
Run! Be a courtesan they're always better equipped for the highs and lows of love.
Rud ah dub dub.
Supple for the lost ones. Roaring for the found.
floater.
flying, eating, purging, again. more. again.
Dark Angel has the best poems ever. Pure brilliance! Anyone who does not like them is just envious they do not have his talent.
10/10 btw
whats up with my IP adress above my name?! this is totally gay.
LOL. Thanks, You just have a way of making me smile. A 10 just because you spend so much time, investigating my life.
Whats sad is if it wasn't you that wrote this, I'd say I see the poetic meaning here. -8-.
A classic story, to be told to generations of youth here to come to better inspire them toward decent, proper, party behavior. -9-
an den? Gothic Blowjob and a cure sticker.
Great poem... it allows the reader to look in and see what is going on. I enjoyed it... made me think of a poem that I wrote about a night I had just a few days ago :) Waiting to be able to post again so that I can post the poem up for everyone else to read. Night poems are some of my favorites, I think because the night is "unknowning" not being able to see as you can in the day, so words help to understand and to be able to see past the darkness. Keep up the good work. One comment you said something about having to be older to be able to understand, not so much age as having that feeling of maturity and love. Watching someone at their most imperfect times and finding the perfection and love in those times. Thinking to yourself... "This...this is the person... the person I could spend the rest of my life with... the rest of my life together...with this person." Sorry about all the dead rests in the quote but I'm sure you understand the reasoning... as it was thought not spoken.
seaweed sushi wrap
i hear the tap
of my chopsticks
my tounge licks
lips turning blue
im an ocean.. yeah.. ok, what was i doing? ah, yes, this piece.. nice imagery.. kinda bored me though. 7.
Is this in response to "Dildo"- this trying to show the good sides of ownership (versus rentership)? I'll be a rock renter for life. But, possessiveness is pretty human.
I liked "I decline out of guilt and fear and love and space." The "My mind concludes/ To much weight./For such a short time." is confusing unless "to" is supposed to be "too" and there is not supposed to be a period after weight. But you are right, bathtubs aren't made for two.
My heart goes out to that innocent octopus. Nice storytelling.