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SupremeDreamer on An Enviable Task by cleverdevice 27 Jul 2003, 3:01 PM

Nice work my lil birdie.. missed you. ;) blessed with 8.

DurtKL on Dildo (formerly titled "It") by http://bandgeek 27 Jul 2003, 12:40 PM

Hmm... What is 'it'?

DurtKL on The Heart of a Man by Queen of Tease 27 Jul 2003, 1:14 PM

Damn What have men done to you? Or what have they not done for you?

Druid_Girl_1984 on Desert Rain by Don-Quixote 27 Jul 2003, 1:58 PM

shit! i meant image

Druid_Girl_1984 on Ranting Drunkard by Don-Quixote 27 Jul 2003, 1:55 PM

This is a very interesting poem. I can almost see someone laying in bed drunk and about to pass out. 8

horus8 on Desert Rain by Don-Quixote 27 Jul 2003, 2:30 PM

[I am cheese man] Lord of the melt. lol. You lie! You're bald! Bald! And you live in a hut in new guinnea.

horus8 on The Rose by Queen of Tease 27 Jul 2003, 1:36 PM

Quite the tease.

Druid_Girl_1984 on Desert Rain by Don-Quixote 27 Jul 2003, 1:57 PM

I like the imagine it provokes.

SupremeDreamer on Dildo (formerly titled "It") by http://bandgeek 27 Jul 2003, 1:06 PM

YAHOOO!!! yes. bravo. good choice my friend, its a damned fine piece now. heres that nine i promised.

SupremeDreamer on The Rose by Queen of Tease 27 Jul 2003, 1:09 PM

cute.. but.. sorry, not being mean, but this isnt my cup of tea.. blessed with 6

http://mulberryfairy on Dildo (formerly titled "It") by http://bandgeek 27 Jul 2003, 12:55 PM

I think the marriage metaphor works, otherwise, I would think kayak.

horus8 on Dildo (formerly titled "It") by http://bandgeek 27 Jul 2003, 1:37 PM

Yep, you're a band geek.

horus8 on some deleted poem 27 Jul 2003, 1:39 PM

satan...satan...SATAN! lol.

god'swife on Ode to a Pizza Hut Roach by http://mulberryfairy 27 Jul 2003, 12:02 PM

Oh, so you know which lives are worth saving and which aren't? Interesting. This isn't poetry, it's a manifesto. I think short story or any prose form is more your style.

http://bandgeek on some deleted poem 27 Jul 2003, 12:15 PM

tragic

DurtKL on The Rose by Queen of Tease 27 Jul 2003, 1:09 PM

sweet little poem "in it's rose colored wear" i don't think a rose has one certain color. One can prolly saw RED but they can also be white, pink, orange, a mix of all the three, or even violet. and you used rose in the line above so it sounds repettitive. "gentle perfume there for my nose to consume" is a nice rhyme but the word consume makes me think of eating up everything greedily. gentle/consume sounds kinda weird unless you meant it. u should keep it in a vase with water or it will wither and dry

horus8 on The Heart of a Man by Queen of Tease 27 Jul 2003, 1:48 PM

Now I liked this. Here's a tightening; The heart of a man Is so simple and thin It is so stubborn That it never gives in The heart of a man Is so different and plain It has no emotions Towards the women he's lain The heart of a man Is so small and black It has no rhythm For the feeling it lacks The heart of a man Is so mischevious and crude It has no manners and is always rude The heart of a man Is so protective and possesive It has no doubts That it's always obsessive. Yippee, let's square dance to it. 10!

horus8 on some deleted poem 27 Jul 2003, 1:53 PM

Savignoun, poetry, dessert, headboarding, childbirth, 9-5, souphouse, tombstone. Math doesn't lie.

horus8 on An Enviable Task by cleverdevice 27 Jul 2003, 3:08 PM

This is good, did you write it?

SupremeDreamer on Part II:Rhetoric by http://bandgeek 27 Jul 2003, 12:21 PM

This one was better. Heres a 7.