i'm drunk and it made me shiver great job

Oh you are a naughty person. hehe. i need a fan. lmao. i love it though. = )

interesting. i like it though. good work. here is an 8

Donnie: I promise one day everything will be better for you.

hey sorry i deleted your comments. if you noticed i deleted everyone's comments. not because i was being rude, but because i might replace the poems or delete them. i am not sure yet, but i am sorry about that. can ya forgive me? i like this poem by the way. ; )

I guess many have a set mind in what poetry should be eh? lol. I laugh at all the pathetic fools who think poetry should be a certain way. Poetry is a expression of one's heart and soul. Of course that is just my thought. here is a ten QT. = )

This poem started off as a poem of respect and i do still respect you but you deleted my comments?! and it wasn't even that mean I was helping you out :( *tear

hey there girl! drop by my site sometime!

quite sweet, I like the flow some of the rhymes seem a bit forced though

omg please stop with the I's WE GET IT!

i really like this one. good work.

Odelay

True up, word.

pokin' the pooty.

If you are going to use the same rhyme sound for every line you should probably not repeat words night and sight. The words are a bit simple too. Check out 'I am the gayest' i think by Dark angel for an example of this form (in best list)

"You're born" "You're hear torn" ahh the life sucks poem take some tylenol chase it with a shot of cuervo and hit the sack it'll be all better tommorow Dr. Lilian Thurman: The search for God is absurd? Donnie: It is if everyone dies alone. (donnie darko)

hehe that is truly funny. i might have deleted them, but at least i read them. ; ) 10

hehe 10

Aww....*sniff* it is a very sweet poem. heh your doing better than me. I keep getting belittled. Oh well i don't care really.

yea! another 10