Hilarious.

Jim was not overated, Paris was.

this could be set to the cure

You little rascal. That might explain alot. -10-

You should have asked her for a beer too. -9-

ah, the weak hand. that's the sort of thing that chicks do not think about. have a 9 day.

Please tell me you ate skittles afterwords. I mean whats a good murder without some skittles after? Only the crazy motherfuckers have to have a smoke and a stiff drink afterwords. The sane ones eat skittles and and drink a nice healthy glass of milk. -8-

Horus, there are very few poems you have ever written that haven't amused me to the point of tears. The idea of you walking door to door selling Avon, is one I couldn't bare. Have a -10- and find yourself some kill. Look on the bright side, free Skin Care!!

Thank you for voting and commenting on one of my poems. I really liked this piece so i give it a ten. = )

i am a female. i am not gay. i am white. quite frankly i am not jewish either. next time think before you say. nice poem though. = )

Hey QT! that i would let you know i really love this poem. well i better go. talk to ya later. = )

I rather enjoy how you mix nature with methamphetimines, very wholesome like gram crackers dipped in pcp.

"money, airbag, scrapbook" okay! I likey. Not sure of the "sick/sorry/sad"...seems like the slashes break it weirdly. 9

This piece is very cool. I love it when poets stick it to each other! The weak hand masturbation makes the poem, but it's the chewbacca ending that gets me ... maybe your next piece should be about chewy masturbating with his furry weak and/or strong hand while solo translates his pleasure moans. Oh, good luck with the Avon.

I never have went anywhere, for myself. And soon, since I've been getting offers to be the next Michael Hutchinson, I believe it'll get worse than better. But for the poem and the moment I will sell it all. And wake up dead in a hotel.

I don't believe that I have read a more vivid poem on this site! I almost gave this an 8 just to save the bell-curve but, upon re-reading it I don't honestly think it can be improved. So, here's your 10. Thanx for making my day!

Ah, cat-tails. the ultimate phalic symbol. It was clearly the sister following in July's footsteps.

Just wondering what does Ouroboros mean? Other than that nice start.

Take comfort that the truth is far sweeter than any place on the best list. I'm hoping so, anyway.

i see a little world reflecting in your eyes here.. welling up a desire to see the other halves.