so you're like too ugly too look at... great

who got the three stars though

that's deep... i'm touched

nicely done... i like it :) -10-

nice and lusty, mr eager. i might change 11th grade to "seventeen", just because.

good idea, just look and revise, and consider some different wording

Something tells me your either pining or lamenting love. Call me crazy, but this doesn't whack me on the head and cause a shitload of thought, and yet I think its very touching. -10-

Blasphemy! lol.

that's some deep stuff

it's pretty rad... i like it

absolutely fabulous

can't say i really enjoyed it... seems more like a child written poem

sorry... you lost me

i used to love that park and it's jam but they tricked me with the fake gold they make you pan out of a disgusting trough :(

hm interesting i like it

Good content

sorry not interested

Cthulhu??? lost me

give war a chance!

watch for the, feathers, they get stuck in your teeth.