DJCARTER
on some deleted poem
24 Jul 2003, 2:56 AM
your the original dr. suess...
Deep conversation huh? Good idea, I like it
Because...
Chewbacca needs Han Solo
to translate.
I fucking love those lines. This is wicked, a great piece of satire and a real turkish thumb to your enemies.
Look what i did to your best poems - 10
lot going on here
sounds like one on eminem's lost rap song....
what's sllyable?
Everybody already knows you yanks are a bunch of uncultured, uncouth clowns. This poem says nothing we don't already know and what's more it says it with bad rythm and ryhme. Here's a tip if you know how shit it is to be a septic tank why don't you go and buy a big gun and go to your local school and see how many kids you can kill and help alter the paradigm.
i agree with stephen
too many hippie poems
I can only imagin that this says something great, and I commend your effort, however I don't speak gibberish, therefore I cannot go either way with this
ahh this poem has finally made it to the heap of trash known as the BEST
lets see how quickly the blue zeros shall knock you off again
sad
Not bad, it seems special when in a song it got other language than the main one.
lot going on here in such a short little poem... nice
wow that's a creative way to arrange letters, what about a poem
Ah, horus, dont worry, alot of my own work is being shat apon with blue zeros aswell.. not many can appreciate the way you challenge people to write better than they currently do, or the way you poke at PC like a madman with a knife. But, you know what? fuck them. ;) 10.
Nice, nice.. ;) 10.
for some reason, that amused me :) i like it!
I like your imagery, good job.
love it. such simple yet profound innocence
never once disappointing. kudos. ten.