Shardik
on Mistaken Battlefields by Brian Tiensvold
26 Jun 2003, 6:17 PM
Imagine someone reading this out loud with a lisp. lol.
F/u
Indeed.
haha
Keep it all, its dandy. (and besides your so methodical I bet you its all been sorted prior to it being on here
-=Or_Gold_Panning_With_A_Mule_Banning=-
Geez man, don't be, so was I.
I never found him to be funny. Chalk it up to creative differences
Laqueesha was young
When he pist in her pink mouf
Tight golden brown cheeks
Whenevber? that could easy confuse a crowd if you ever plan to read this out loud.
"So why isn't going that easy?" -- Notice that this line sticks out like a thorn? fragmented..
-So why isn't it going that easy- just a suggestion anyway.
with those issues out of the way, i enjoyed this poem.
blessed with an 8
lovely
i like what i read
Amusing and well presented.
I require hands to clap loud in the theater of language, so this made me sing shouts of "Bravo".
humm... umm. -shrug- is this commentry or poetry, because now i cant decide, it gets confusing..
Teenage style.. yes, and your slogan should be "Preppy Boi"
Blessed with a nine.
do you spell skater boy like
SK8TER BOI
and listen to
PUNK RAWK?
lmao.