INTRANSIT
on Hot Potato by Shardik
19 Jun 2003, 6:06 AM
yer killin' me.
done.
Look again, carefully this time.
As the funniest member of Poemranker, and one of the earliest (1542) I would just like to say that I am very talented and have three huge tits growing on my chambermaid.
The "emotion" here was "very" in the moment, but since I'm limbless, you should change "Swimming" to "strategic floating". Thank you.
Also, you are about as funny as an anul castration. Whoever told you that you were funny must have really liked you.
language perhaps loses its own power as it is phrased in 'anarchy movement' terms.
I think the best types of these poems are perhaps a bit more subversive
i don't like being savage about people so i will simply register my agreeance with bachus
The last two lines really cinch it up. Soil warm lips and hips I wager.
classifying this as "other" is fitting. it is something "other" than poetry. It is particularly trite and stolid...tired, unoriginal and horribly riddled with typos.
"standind right out
side my winow space."
you sound like a retard on drugs.
Sorry to hear that.
Lovely
Delightful, sounds like a BBQ worth stopping by.
Intaglio & remorsefull.
Shoe lace humpers, the lot of them.
So you're purposely keeping me out of the top 15, huh? Well that's just typical. But hey, I don't begrudge it, not after the things you wrote on my poems the other day. I also like geckos, so keep your place in the top 15 and good luck and thank you.
he shoulda bitch slapped the guy. point taken.
Powerful magic.
this flows very well, like a story really
yes, best way
they'll all kill eachother in the end