Kitch
on some deleted poem
12 Jun 2003, 1:41 AM
Brilliant ! 09
and ininspiring
But what a crap title bet you regret that?
You are one nasty mother-fucker. Sweet.
And then does he get dandelions? Great title.
Really admire your works. Much respect to you.
JoyLuck
on Ga-go, a Filippino play, by a not Filippino man. by Jeremi B. Handrinos
12 Jun 2003, 1:31 AM
priests molesting mustached filoppino girls
i'm sorry but this sucks
Strong and powerful reminiscence piece. Excellent
Could I offer you some advice by any chance?
I am quite fond of this... ^_^ The last stanza is really funny.
This poem has lots to say, there are some odd things in it tho.
(In reference to this, George W. Bush makes me ashamed to be American. >x( )
~sigh~
Here's a numerical symbol of my frustrated desire.
That's all.
I feel constipated.
Aaaaaaaargh....
Parfait? Anyone? Going once, GOING TWICE All right, looks like it's all mine, SOLD! to the man from Manchuria.
Erk better you than me, but think of the tater tots?
did you mean Cyclical?
some deleted user
on The deafening silence in the world or something by Bachus
12 Jun 2003, 12:37 AM
to me,it seems like a brainstorming, but i liked the style.
WHAT??
No.
This was odd... I like the "Continue? [Y/N]" thing, tho...