This poeme contains the word 'shark' which is contained in the username 'darkshark' which contains the word 'dark' which is also in the username '-=Dark_Angel=-'. A little suspicious, don't you think?

nice

another challenge to my thought processes. damn.

cut, print, frame.

ok insomnia with cicada is a good rhyme perhaps a few less big words, they tend to be heavily loaded which impedes original communication

usually, one glimpses into a room through a not-quite-closed door. could it be that in her haste, she thought she had shut it? and it creaked open, but she failed to notice it since her focus was elsewhere? otherwise, quite strong.

Good expression of feelings with a good flow of words. The poem says what's on the author's mind and gives the reader a clear cut view of what the author is feeling. Good for me!

A simply beautiful poeme, er poem - im sorry i was not around to see the origional.

Better, I get it now.

No. Scooby's my dog. close enough.

have you changed this? I prefer it today perhaps it is the mirror

Those first two lines are PURE GOLD BABY!

why the queen mum of england?

snowflakes falling into a dead squirrels mouth like paratroopers on d - day great poem baughworm we should write another poem 2gether some day

thanks for the reference i haven't ranked this i don't think that was the point (some people obviously do)

Premature Nappy Removal (Free verse) by -=Dark_Angel=- As it pours out onto the sheets Globules splatter my face and skin I'm drenched in a monstrous shower of my own feculence O Jesu, what have I done...

i reread this today and i like it a lot great fucking poem it's now a 4 + 6

I'm a little confused about the wording, but the overall theme and flow of the selection worked for me.

Isnt God alive? oh no ive been living my life with the impresssion he was!

You must be handsome.