horus8
on some deleted poem
8 Jun 2003, 7:05 PM
A very good poem.
What a crock.
Tits are pitifully overated.
Brilliant.
"for today these walls spoken of
course still appear standing firm as ever" you could make this legible in a future edit, because it sucks and ruins your poem, since it makes no fucking sense.
"appear to be just what they always where" were, not where. and again in the line after that "where" is were.
You are, YOU ARE! not "your". "Your a typical guy" So are you, isn't that keen, also, once again "your" is you're, idiot.
can i get a side of holy ghost with that?
Hmm. this sounds a lot like LIBEL. or maybe even SLANDER.
I've held back long enough. Another fresh faced danger teen has arrived. INCOMING!!!!
"I could blacktop the universe" Ha! 10.
God's wife is to Dickerson, what your mouth is to Dickormouth. By the way I hate William Blake almost as much as I hate you fuck nose.
Also, quite intriguing work being done here.
Jehova witnesses still meet in halls, correct? lol.
shit on a stick with a side of shit-o (poo jello).
[you could say} <chorusx2,987> And it still wouldn't be good enough.
A shitzsicle of the coldest calibur.
I just listened to a couple of your guy's songs, and you are all going to hall, I rather enjoyed it. Have fun on the way.
Yes, it did.
You're really... You're my..... you're not