Bachus
on The Outcry by thepinkbunnyofdoom
2 Jun 2003, 3:08 PM
Yes.
One hundred forty two, yesterday, the middle of nowhere
*BLAM*
http://poemranker.com/poem-details.jsp?id=49662
Take that and run with it, you freakin' chirp.
Bacchian swagger award. Stunning gripping and all that other critic jargon.
I had to bring this back:
http://www.poemranker.com/poem-details.j
commendable, this [commentable] version.
huzzah!
shelton, ct
home of the wiffle ball.
Worst thing you've ever wrote, but the dedication, to D.A. and J.H. Was almost funny. No offense ment but this sux. -2-
"That my search will end with an eleven inch black veiny dildo" We'', that's how I would've ended it anyways.
Sound proposal to me.
now wait. i'm confused.
You know? JUST LIKE THAT. two men one dildo going into battle, charging "WE!" Would be our astute battle cry, racing down the hill dildo flopping back and forth occasionally giving us fat lips and black eyes, and we would be holding it together like relay runners unable to decide who should let go and who should go forward and on TO VICTORY!
that sounds a little meatier than a slap, mr. slapmeonthepatio. sounds more like a slammeonthepatio, or a reammeonthepatio, or even an analrapemeonthepatio
will you beat the head of my cock with the head or your cock? or do i need to break your teeth,just in case you get frisky?
yes! testify.
Oscar nod.
Is it your bottem lip glued to a mosquito's penis? If so that's ace!
Preach! Preach!
Excellent, do.