Ouch! thats so brilliant, It makes my head hurt. Discovery of a Simple Truth. -10-

Why would you want to see D.A. Naked?

Ahhhhhhh <toot>. Best you've written, yet. Whether tomorrows alive or dead.

Incomplete D- See Me After Class -Your 10th Grade English Teacher- -6-

Breathe. Labiate...yum yum. Nirvana!

No, but I might toot.

Sweetly and intensely deep and meaningful. -9-

Ha! Unless she's a fat cow dike with a glass eye.

Uh huh, and?

"He came in the winter of my soul" Yes! he came all over it. "Then when my petals regained vibrant blush He stood back and smiled, and heaved a deep sigh". Baby, I would slurp on that tight little vulva of yours until you projectile orgasmed all over my dual face, and baby, I would gargle that hot steaming piss and go back for round 'the two'. I would introduce your ankles to your earlobes while my toes did the comforter dig/crawl. I would have my thumb prying in your hot sweet mouth while the other hand clenched head hair then I'd vibrate like an epileptic don juan until your eyeballs went satanic.

this is perfect. That's all I have to say

Nice the bottom two lines first stanza don't really fit into the structure. You have used obvious rhyme but resisted using obvious in between the rhymes

I don't recall asking you to teach me how to shrink heads dr. Besides, imagination is impossible to teach to people that mow their lawn wearing hush puppies and zinca on their noses. By the way God's dead haven't the Jews that run the head shrinking pill popping industry explained that to you yet?

How you changed bee to be in the midsts of a very 'deep' insect poem <a life metaphor no doubt, yip yip> knocked me out of my high chair. Good. gooode.

So let me get this straight, I'm looped enough to admit I suck cock for cash get blown for dough ride the hershey highway for grass and I am a drunk drug addict. Yet, I somehow I am afraid to admit to my EVEN darker secret... Animal porn.? Sometimes I think you're so smart that you're a fucking an idiot. Bright, but altogether not all there. You know what I mean? For instance, look at the various nut jobbers that use your username? But what? still you maintain the shine upon your spokes and steer with your teeth.? Dear dear dear love... Boy, are you a troubled little bugger these days. I do however enjoy the gangbus very much mind you. Not the sex, because I despise physical contact. (unless it's for mulah, like for instance my trip to palm springs last night 'to see the DR. 16 hours of work [mostly eating, drinking, being pampered, rubbed, fondeled, praised in luxurious settings then I get to blow a load on the sic old rich jew's face] for 1600.00 tax free shhh], cont...from the gangbus reference above-- but just the blatant disregard for vulva and minorities makes me chuckle wicky waw wick shirt spurt. Dig. Sometimes I'll go through ten shirts before twelve the day after a drug binge. Naturally, I blame it on coffe and jam to the maid and my girlfriend. My neighbors won't even look in my direction because my desk window faces their dining room table, and they're orthodox jews and gangbus is on my monitor fullsteam ahead. lol. They like, grab their kids, and race for the car eyes down if I see them outside during the day. HA! really just gets my goat. he he. Life is just sweets and prunes Gertrude sweets and prunes.

You want to see timing.Check out the inside of my brain. http://www.paradiselost.com/index.php?module=htmlpages&func=display&pid=2

Perhaps you need more Kale in your diet albineato.

Alright, but lacks all but a trace of emotion. Hard to get into, feels like your writing from too great a distance for me to connect. -7-

Interesting and confusing. -9-

Yig!