Caducus
on Timing by INTRANSIT
27 May 2003, 3:47 PM
loved it 10
Likable enough.
Did you get the inspiration for this from Chris de Burgh?
Truely Worthy of Being dedicated to our Fine Feathered Friend. -10-
Lame and sounds like it was made by a 4th grader, as a joke to make his friends laugh.
Yes Roses are out dated but nowhere other than the title does it actually say rose. I think Its a little harash to say that they'll Never write that well Bachus, I mean hey who knows? I give this a -7- cause its not bad but is a bit cliche(no offense), even tho you did the cliche well, I'm afraid I've seen better.
Obi Wan has taught you well.
Join the dark side (ooooopppppaaaar)
Your still my muse this is so rich in detail
I've been there before and it sux AWARDE. -10-
Great writing this, If you ever record it as a song let me know.
-10-
thepinkbunnyofdoom
on Time flies (or why i never have time on my hands) by blurryphotograph
27 May 2003, 1:19 PM
Quite Poetic, Similar to One of D.A.'s recent poems, but yours is actually a poem. -10-
Amazingly well done.
LOL, humorish. -9-
I like the last line in the second verse, very true. Anyway...not bad, there are some lines that could be redone but all in all, nice job. (9)
Kassanna, regardless what anyone says, I think this is a beautiful heartfelt poem and the rhythym is very nice.
We have all had our gardners
Wonderful !
A myriad of images which you have condensed more so than the others. This reminds me of a Frost poem I read
-9-
Meh, I have a hard time relating each stanza to the others execept 1 and 4. -6- But only cause I see room for improvement.
I thought the first line repeation really made it work well together -9-
Deserving so much more, but it'll have to do. -10-
Well written and Enjoyed very much. -10-