wow

is bahookie polynesian for shit

I must give you back your golden Q-Tip award for this. The awards I ordered didn't make it through the firefight.

Bingo.

The pepsi challenge beats tab in the polls.

"And for that one day that will be together" we'll

Are you saying that: lil cindy lu who =df any x which satisfies the predicate ( x has pigtails & x has freckles & there is some y and some z such that ( y is female & y begat x & z is male & z is married to y & ~(z begat x) & x is the toy of z & z warns x 'don't tell' & the hands of z are on the body of x & the mouth of z is on the face of x)) & there is some y such that ( x loved y & for all z ( ~(y=z) -> (x loved z -> x loved z later than x loved y)) & ~(y loved x)) & x has crinolines starched in circles holding poodle skirts wide & for all y ( (y is Elvis at Heartbreak Hotel v y is 'I Like Ike' v y is polio shots) -> x swoons over y) & there is some y and some z such that ( y is female & y begat x & z is male & z is married to y & ~(z begat x) & x smells the stench of z & the arms of z bind down x & x is big now & z cannot get x again) & x tumbles into love, a dozen times, maybe more & there is some y such that ( y is a world & y is around x & for all z ( (z is a world & z is around x) -> z=y) & y is changing as Joan Baez sings out, Diamonds and Rust & the Washington Wall wept, too many lives late) & x is riding roughened seas & the boat of x is battened down & x is facing the storms & x is trembling inside & there is rain on the face of x & ~(x is turning back) for all y ~there is some y such that ( y is hungry and wanting & y is at home in the skin of x) & there is some y and some z such that ( y is a ghost & z is a ghost & ~(y=z) & y still lingers & z is routed out) & x has hands in a fist & x has arms opened wide)

Holy Hippopotamas !

I suggest you go felch Billy Corgan

OMG I love it! I hope you don't mind if I put this in my little book of 'keepers.' I'll be reading more of your work. :)

How vulgar, you lout !

Alas so true my tortured soul.

I wouldn't go throughing things in the trash bin, the idea of defining yourself in a poem is OK, just work on it, some poems take a lot of reshaping you just have to keep at them.

The LSD trip at the beginning was interesting but the second part of the poem was much more poetic.

Not bad imagery here. I like it.

I am sorry to say this but It looks like you are just plain pathetic. It is short and that is good. but You have no heart

Good Good Good Good Perfect. Working hard.

That's it, blame the critics for your own failings. This screed sounds like Richard Nixon in '62 when he lost the Governor's race. "You won't have Dougie Soderstrom to kick around anymore!" Like Nixon, you too I fear shall return.

I'm glad to have to vote again. If I'm reading this right, it is positioned as a reversal of events.

Oh my