Decent but as I'm sure you've been told runs long

I liked Definity, though I have never heard it before, but I lost it on the high point in my eyes, probab;ly a result of the low point in my mind, it has a nice feel though.

Better than what I've read so far but still not quite "free thinking enough"

Yig! I say, Sure you got a message but your just saying it with no style, no flare, no room for any intereptation. Try giving a little effort at being poetic.

Welcome to Poemeranker. I am -=Dark_Angel=-, the naughty one. You will probably see me again at some point, mocking your tepid, clichéd poemes. Have a good time!

I would love to hear it set to music!

Hmmm... D.A.'s Vote here with a so much as a real word surprises me. Personally I thought this was good but not worthy of 10. I'd say more like an 8. Its good but just a little cliche, don't ask me how it manages not to be.

Haha, sorry... I try and see the best in poems but this one didn't seem to make me feel anything at all. I'll say this for you, you managed you be a little chiche, without diving off the deep end but your words fail to make any emotion conection to me. Not Bad, Not Good. Nothing really outstanding other than it doesn't strike me as either good writing or bad. Since I feel neutral to this poem -5-.

Such Talent such skill, brings a tear to my eye. Since I did get a good Laugh (We're talking 3 whole minutes here) -10-.

Christain, Christain, Christian. Jesu have mercy on your soul, you take one concept and apply it while forgetting all the rest. For instance, Judge lest not ye be judged, love thy neighbor, and you ignore the majority of christian history. How many crusades have there been? George's point of view(or the one he has tryed to express) is that he is helping his nieghbor(Iraq) by being its doctor and cutting out the diseased tissue. Look you have faith in god right? Well I have to call you one of little faith. If god, has a plan for everything, than he has a reason to have W. leading our nation. Cap him all you want but don't dog his faith cause you don't believe that for whatever reason he should be there. P.S. Christ is supposedly perfect, Men are not. Remember that.

TOP EIGHT THINGS THAT I FIND REALLY ANNOYING 1. RELENTLESS SELF-PROMOTION 2. SELF-IMPORTANCE 3. LACK OF IRONY 4. SELF-RIGHTEOUSNESS 5. LACK OF A SENSE OF HUMOUR 6. OVER-SENSITIVITY 7. MISPLACED BELIEF IN ONE'S OWN INTELLIGENCE 8. RELENTLESS GOD-BOTHERING

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Left Wing all the way, even if I some what agree with what you have to say, more opinion that poem. Try maybe you should try ryhming.

What is this supposed to mean? It rather reminds me of the stories in 'Scary Stories to Tell in the Dark', which has terrifying drawings, but anticlimactic stories which sound vaguely menacing but all turn out to end "but it was really a ghost!" or "AND THEN SOMETHING LOUD AND SURPRISING HAPPENED!!" This doesn't even have those for an ending. Why does it taper off into some kind of horrible adolescent ode to being misunderstood?

Lets attach this to my tingling poem and see how many heads explode.

1mc. This is not your captain speaking. The baby is drowning. I repeat. The baby is bowling. That is all.

hmmm....i havent been on the site in awhile....but this certainly brought me back, not sure what i think of this...quite honored someone would make a poem about me even if the are comparing me to a psycho...hmm i give a 0 just because i had to pee really bad but i wanted to finish reading, now ive nearly soiled myself. thanx alot

10

yeah, no one understands us asl?

Very interesting, nice work