-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
on <Haiku> by Entelechist
26 May 2003, 4:53 PM
-=Haiku=- (Haiku) by -=Dark_Angel=-
Beauty, wonderment,
Feeling, emotion, truth, love,
Magical forest.
I was disappointed that the scariest thing you could think of was a mugger. Oh, a mugger, that's going to keep me up at night shitting my keks.
What were you trying to say with this piece?
If your going to use my name sycophant? Try saying something intelligent, like for instance, "hi, I have one testacle and a pet model airplane, by the way, I am an extremely lonely and sad person".
I think you've got some explaining to do, sicko.
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I expected as much.
Hole-some.
Charismatic! And as valuable to literature as velcro and zippers. congradulations asshole.
Dear Readers:
This shall be my final comment on the website: www.poemranker.com.
When I first heard about this website on Yahoo (The day it was
highlighted as a really neat opportunity for those who wanted to have a
chance to share their poetic efforts with others) I was delighted.
Since that time, it has become increasingly clear, at least to me anyway,
that this is no place for one who might want to receive serious
feedback to be. The feedback that one receives doesn't seem to be
related, in any way, to the poetic merits of one's writing. So often,
it seems, their responses are nothing more than a sordid and demented
attempt to hurt others.
Except for a few rather looney attempts to wright something crazy,
most of what I have written represented an honest attempt to do my best
as a poet. And some of my poems were, I feel, perhaps rather decent.
But regardless of what I wrote (regardless of how good or poor it might
have been) there were those on this website who seemed to do their best
to degrade my, as well as others, efforts.
The website was, and still is, a really good idea. But unless those,
who have done their dead-level best to destroy the potential value of
this website, choose to go somwhere else, it is my opinion that this
website will have little, if any value, for those of us who would like
to share our poetic efforts with other mature individuals who seem to
care.
I shall continue to write poetry, however good or poor it just might be,
but it will no longer appear on this website.
Thank you for taking the time to hear me out, and the very best to those
of you who have an honest desire to write, as well as to share, your
well-intented comments with others.
Your Friend,
Doug Soderstrom, Ph.D.
Professor of Psychology
e-mail: dougsod@wcjc.cc.tx.us
P.S. And for those of you who choose to respond to my comments in an
unkind, and perhaps even immature and thoughtless manner, have at it-----
-but please do remember this one last thing: "Do unto others as you
would like for them to do unto you."
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I cant say anything more than this...i completly agree and i do wish that people would give actual helpful comments instead of degrading people on their thoughts
This is the best, absolute best exploration of human themes I have ever read. You have promise. Use it.
-10-
I rather fancy you would enjoy the horrifying short stories of Thomas Ligotti. He's like a cross between H.P. Lovecraft and F. Kafka, but with more insane, screaming mannequins.
This is Quite Goode.
Dear Readers:
This shall be my final comment on the website: www.poemranker.com.
When I first heard about this website on Yahoo (The day it was
highlighted as a really neat opportunity for those who wanted to have a
chance to share their poetic efforts with others) I was delighted.
Since that time, it has become increasingly clear, at least to me anyway,
that this is no place for one who might want to receive serious
feedback to be. The feedback that one receives doesn't seem to be
related, in any way, to the poetic merits of one's writing. So often,
it seems, their responses are nothing more than a sordid and demented
attempt to hurt others.
Except for a few rather looney attempts to wright something crazy,
most of what I have written represented an honest attempt to do my best
as a poet. And some of my poems were, I feel, perhaps rather decent.
But regardless of what I wrote (regardless of how good or poor it might
have been) there were those on this website who seemed to do their best
to degrade my, as well as others, efforts.
The website was, and still is, a really good idea. But unless those,
who have done their dead-level best to destroy the potential value of
this website, choose to go somwhere else, it is my opinion that this
website will have little, if any value, for those of us who would like
to share our poetic efforts with other mature individuals who seem to
care.
I shall continue to write poetry, however good or poor it just might be,
but it will no longer appear on this website.
Thank you for taking the time to hear me out, and the very best to those
of you who have an honest desire to write, as well as to share, your
well-intented comments with others.
Your Friend,
Doug Soderstrom, Ph.D.
Professor of Psychology
e-mail: dougsod@wcjc.cc.tx.us
P.S. And for those of you who choose to respond to my comments in an
unkind, and perhaps even immature and thoughtless manner, have at it-----
-but please do remember this one last thing: "Do unto others as you
would like for them to do unto you."
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The only problem here is your lack of poetry and grasp upon reallity, because, even a first year (psych student) can see that you plainly have issues about your tiny penis and detachable nose. I would sugget moving out of your mother's basement as soon as possible and quit eating so much cream of wheat.
Keep the title (because it shows the paradox of your legless talent, and depth of your blunt toothed vulva) but make th "poem itself" about an ugly asian chick who discovers one day that she's not ugly... She's a broken record." Then and only then will you be closer to the truth behind why you really suck.
spiraling
silent
sporatic
third
This is quality.
Thank you.
Doug