Felzpoet
on W.A.R. by lunar
24 May 2003, 4:59 PM
Guess it was a miss
and so was this
OK!
Dude give up tht sucked i couldnt even finish readin it
great work would make a good song
very touching and obviously has alot of meaning
Some style some flare but not really much there -6-
nice
real love can hurt be careful u dont mistake it for somethin else
btw i have a poem by the same name
wht?
Pointless
Sounds like lyrics from Taproot
good poem very touching
we all wear masks to hide wht we are
but past the lies lay ourselves but are we hiddin the truth from the worl or hiding it from ourselves
good poem got me to think
I thought it was good
My life means nothin to me sometimes too
Anger MAnange ment i thought i had problems
But look at it this way u aint as bad off as this poem
The word love should not be used by someone who is only 14
u have no idea wut it is to be in love wit someone hell u barely are of age to consimate a marrage let along be ready to be in one
dont mistake every little thin for love ull just hurt urself
Like talkin to urself do ya
yeah we,, me to but dont make poems out of it
thts real good man but not as good as ur others
and when crit me remember i am only in H.S.
LOL. I love it. -10-
Sweeet
Long, but very similar to his style. Very Repetive, but I think that helps to get your point across. A lovely piece indeed. -10-