Mawkish.

I like the simplicity and the honesty. It reminds me a bit of William Carlos Williams. Keep writing.

you are a strange bird. i like your work.

A requisition immaculate.

I thought secret was a woman's roll on antiperspirent?

Sounds like you're on it. Both.

Like any other friday night in!

And what about the socks? Somebody think of the socks!!!!

You don't have a brother called Tom, do you?

:) ....i dont think i need to add to that!

The trees like it when they are plundered by little feats with feet.

dAMNit girl. Hell yes. and to think I like 'im. Spun well.

Fuck yeah! drop the (lived fast) and let it off the leash!!!

There's certainly a sense of power here, but I don't get the last three lines.

boy, when you come back, you come BACK!

Don't be depressed. The Penna is gorgeous this time of year. I would know. I've caroused your roadways many a time. Go climb a tree. I'm not kidding, you'll feel better.

Proverbs? I'd look that up, but I don't think I have a bible around here. It might give me some insight to this one. (strange that I don't have a bible, though I HAVE read the entire bible from cover to cover, years ago...)

the return of Plasticgirlwithgun?

this poem made me want to read your other stuff... i like it....i like it a lot... how convenient that my name also appears in the title! this is my fave of all that i have read so far on the site.... as far as editing it... keep this version in a box somewhere as a reminder of how you made me smile! :)

yikes