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some deleted user on Road to Recovery by thepinkbunnyofdoom 17 May 2003, 4:41 PM

WOW

INTRANSIT on A way by Entelechist 17 May 2003, 5:06 PM

I tink ees okay. When you cross the sanity barrier, let me know how the water is would you please?

richa on Goldfish in his little bowl by daniella 18 May 2003, 7:25 AM

you are one of the writers who is not as well known as top ones such as mr pig and zzinnia but your poems stand out from most of the pack. As for this its use of language is beautiful and as a poem is complete

richa on The windshield-wiper blues by INTRANSIT 18 May 2003, 7:26 AM

i don't think this is a complete fuck up, I quite like the repetition and humour

Mona Lisa on Darkness ( A tribute to the poem FOOTPRINTS) by Mr Pig 17 May 2003, 4:26 PM

I think its wonderful. MAybe if you hadn't of referenced it to Footprints you may have had the recognition you deserve, other than that I think it carries a message of hope. 9

thepinkbunnyofdoom on some deleted poem 17 May 2003, 4:26 PM

Well written, very content driven. I can tell somebody has been studying. -8-

thepinkbunnyofdoom on some deleted poem 17 May 2003, 4:31 PM

Hmmm... I thought that only males could really capture the prison life and love from the inside, but apparently That was sexest of me. A bit mushy(hey, what isn't) but a good read. -8-

thepinkbunnyofdoom on some deleted poem 17 May 2003, 4:39 PM

Actually quite a bright lad indeed, but considering that I don't really care about war(one way or the other) I didn't find this too appealing. Still as are your others, well written with great depth and clearity of detail. -7-

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on Darkness ( A tribute to the poem FOOTPRINTS) by Mr Pig 17 May 2003, 5:28 PM

When I trod on an onion, I was lost in complete darkness, And shouted for God to rescue me, But all He did was butter my garden Because he was made of rice.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on some deleted poem 17 May 2003, 5:36 PM

great use of "see" to rhyme with "amputee"!!!!11

daniella on some deleted poem 17 May 2003, 9:05 PM

John, this is the woman's heart sung. Strange this, from a man.

daniella on some deleted poem 17 May 2003, 9:20 PM

what a day you have had. get some sleep now for your exams.

daniella on Eternity by Jigg 17 May 2003, 9:21 PM

cute, but animo.

maffy on some deleted poem 18 May 2003, 3:33 AM

Kaolin: a fine day used in ceramics and refactories and as a filler or coating for paper and textiles. (from the American Heritiage Dictionary) I'm more confused now than ever before.

-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. on some deleted poem 18 May 2003, 5:37 AM

I think you really need to do a little more research before you start writing poemes! Good try though!

richa on The windshield-wiper blues by INTRANSIT 18 May 2003, 7:26 AM

i don't think this is a complete fuck up, I quite like the repetition and humour

richa on The windshield-wiper blues by INTRANSIT 18 May 2003, 7:26 AM

i don't think this is a complete fuck up, I quite like the repetition and humour

richa on Expired (early horus8 before the change) by Jeremi B. Handrinos 18 May 2003, 7:28 AM

some nice lines, I couldn't be bothered reading all of it. Some greek poets took all their life writing poems this long. Try have more confidence that a few lines will show your ability

thepinkbunnyofdoom on some deleted poem 17 May 2003, 4:36 PM

Nice rythem, I can almost hear the melody in my head. -9-

some deleted user on My Nieghborhood(2) by thepinkbunnyofdoom 17 May 2003, 4:02 PM

I thought there was promise?!