INTRANSIT
on Expired (early horus8 before the change) by Jeremi B. Handrinos
18 May 2003, 8:28 AM
hunt down what little fat there is. and burn it off.
Then, frame this fucker.
Interesting.
Ahem.
How did this get missed?
gotta run around the poemranker store and play kechup.
Works for me.
What is the point of the poeme, given the commentary? Is it beauty? Or is it insanity...
...it is neither. For it is vanity.
Lovely sentiment
Oh! Aptly expressed.
Right on! I enjoyed this profound explanation of the "pimple poem."
Now, this one made me think!
Sad memories...
I remember it well. Thanx for writing!
Yes.
'Tis true.
Aptly put! And it rhymes, too. Right on!
OOOOOK!
I'm confused. Why write a short for Poemranker critique? I do identify with it, though.
Hey, whats with stealin' my goldfish mojo, man?
Obviously, you feel strongly about this poem. I alway wonder if we dropped religion altogether, would we free our minds faster?