I really liked this. Esp. the 3rd and 4th line.

Spinal tap for folkeys

ok -8-

Wow! a very evocative poem. One of the best I have read on this site.

This isn't that bad. I like "for sleep means quick'ning next days pain," but besides that there isn't anything that stellar about this. -6-

Pretty mental, I like the ending very beatish The use of tits, niggers, aids is perhaps a bit evocative by numbers though

Quite angry, full of feeling One criticism : little to anchor the poem to something concrete (pretty rich coming from me!)

Confessional as always (if not of you of a character you created) but sharp enough to withstand it

This is a bit creepy, almost like a depressing nursery rhyme

I lost my body, in the sands of time. Lost my mind, to the sound of this rhyme. lost everybody, everyone I know. I lost everybody, that's why I'm alone.

Well, what is it?

hmm its different, there is something here i like but i'm not sure what it is, -6-

its ok, nothing wrong with it but u could add more

its good but i had trouble seeing it, i like the word placement, -7-

uh huh, u can do better then this, i've seen it

a bit short

Yep, as with your last few I enjoyed this one a great deal. Really well done. 8

Not deserving a blue 1, I wish people would say why they give these low marks but hey that's just me being a whiny Brit. Great poem, I wanted to give it an 8 but instead it shall have a nine to try to balance the anonymosity.

For so long this will make me think...I believe that slightly more clarity would help the dumbasses like myself to understand, but talk to god'swife for advice on things like this. It's very nice anyway. 8 I particularly like the ending, as with much of your stuff it seems dreamy, somewhat detached (don't know that I spell that right either) and quietly contemplative which I like in poetry.