<{Baba^Yaga}>
on some deleted poem
30 Apr 2003, 12:21 AM
change all of your "I'ms" to 'you're' and you'll be onto something. Jesus.
SHIT AND ABRUPT! 1
Like this, worthy of haiku
If you think freedom roams the streets of New York, you are peering out of a closeted crack with a 'sliver' of light. The only thing free roaming the stretts of NY are "CHUDS at the mall". Thankyou and show more'''''sssss to secure the posessional inherences of your nouns for instance "freedom's rights." coward's blee bler blig... and so on.
Good this, a poem using the most basic words arranged
(so basic even I can translate it)
Wale's are shit at rugby too. I liked the end,it made a nice change.4
Really not my cup of tea, but I appreciate your poem as it stands.4
Hey the ending was good.
If it's about ya-self though don't bother with the death scene, no point if ya canny leave a good looking corpse.live long and ugly?4
before you made me cum all over your hairy nipples. No really, that sounds like a college diary memo next to your biology footnotes (your poem in general), but I guess it's alright.7.
Oh, and chocked should be choked lest you want to further embaress you and your sorority sisters with more ghastly ebonical laqueeshanisms.
Un poème qui est profond, l'idée est merveilleuse. Mais si je puis me permettre, il y a beaucoup de fautes d'ortographes. Keep it up...
You shall append the following line to your poeme:
"et pour cette pomme de terre, qui j'adore de tout mon coeur"
Could you hold the world a bit looser please? You're crushing my lawn chairs, and scaring my toy poodle.
If you fucking nerds had a life outside of sounding in desperate need of needind a life you'd go loiter at a seven eleven or a pool hall, or something like a normal fucking slacker teenaged pimple evaluaters would. flips d35? hi, i'm chucks 2d10's upsideayoface! critical! I fear my +3 vorpal sword hath cleaved your breast plate.
Wert?"REQUESCANT IN PACE, BUDDY" in Pace picante saucers. L...OMG! wert?
Will Smith right?
Remember me when you are president
James hurtfield and metalurgica presents Florida! wert?
HaHa!!!!!!!!!!!!wait a minute... Where's bones? Analysis please. Chekov my shoe please.
good but it ended to abruptly