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Ranger on Baby-sitting by Bobjim the II 29 Apr 2003, 10:29 AM
No.
Ranger on Expectant by Bobjim the II 29 Apr 2003, 10:30 AM
No.
andrewjthomas on I Am a Snob, or, 'A Definition' by JakeBike 29 Apr 2003, 3:06 PM
amen, but you forgot the "goth" sub-genre... where common themes and words include "blood, darkness, soul, cutting"
Ranger on some deleted poem 29 Apr 2003, 10:39 AM
Sweet, calm and slightly wistful. I love this.
Shardik on The Captain Plecostumus Rap by INTRANSIT 29 Apr 2003, 5:11 PM
you are really quite funny, my plecostomus was torn appart to weeks ago by my red evil and green terror. In takes a mean pleco to scrape glass in my tank. oh and it's. wick wa wick wa wick wah wicky wah, chick chaw.
some deleted user on waking up to fucking reality by d35 29 Apr 2003, 5:24 PM
its pretty, really makes u think about the meaning or meanings
richa on The Bored Housewife by Caducus 29 Apr 2003, 10:27 AM
I don't want to take sides here, But it read well very fluent
richa on Dumb Ideas by thepinkbunnyofdoom 29 Apr 2003, 10:29 AM
the loud rhymes and wreckless use of words give this a spirit of humor and exasperation
Ranger on Regrets by Mikius 29 Apr 2003, 10:38 AM
Here's how it is: I like the content very much, but the timing is dodgy in places. For example change line 10 to simply 'leaving regrets', have a look through it and you will see what needs reducing. I expect you will reedit this one too so shall save my vote for the time being.
Shardik on Brother by andrewjthomas 29 Apr 2003, 4:18 PM
Fresh.
Shardik on Pine by andrewjthomas 29 Apr 2003, 4:55 PM
pining.
some deleted user on Sweet Dreams by d35 29 Apr 2003, 5:27 PM
yea, connect the events it would then be much better, still good story -8-
Fear of Garbage on Pine by andrewjthomas 29 Apr 2003, 5:43 PM
this has a lot of potential but i expected much more from the last stanza
sliver on some deleted poem 29 Apr 2003, 9:02 PM
great job. a poet in the works... Lets see some more "Bratsy" Sliver
Shardik on waking up to fucking reality by d35 29 Apr 2003, 5:32 PM
I never thought of putting pineapples on my chizstek, THANKS!
Ranger on Lost love by Mikius 29 Apr 2003, 10:33 AM
With this I see promise, read what gw said and take it in, then redraft this. I won't vote this time round, I will let you edit it first. Keep it going mon ami
Shardik on sunday morning precarious by andrewjthomas 29 Apr 2003, 5:01 PM
It border lines being a bit to contrived, unless you guys didn't fuck then it would make sense.
some deleted user on waking up to fucking reality by d35 29 Apr 2003, 5:25 PM
i give it a 10
Shardik on Japanese nature. by daniella 29 Apr 2003, 4:13 PM
Great! but your entire gist of the spirit is in the title not the process of explaining it to yourself.
INTRANSIT on For her he swam with sharks by Shardik 29 Apr 2003, 5:14 PM
one more (k) in your moniker and you could be a hemi-pene. what's a whole pene called? does the female get shot-peened? if he loses one, does he get peened off? i'll stop now.