Someday I shall write as well as thee.. But for now, I'll just keep on truckin'.

dreamed up by benjamin franklin to help farmers if I'm not mistaken. WHORE.

ignore the trolls. infact...BOYCOTT! and the poem was good.

Closer than I am to anything resembling rythm.

How low can you go?

Hey! why not another re-edit. For old times sake?

how come only losers write or think they can write poetry?

One of the best haikus I've read on this site, or anywhere, Zzin.

Nicely done, Zzin; I could see this as a cat rap. Friends of mine clean carpets and had to work at a townhouse where the woman had over 100 cats and the whole place was layered in dreck like you wouldn't believe.

Yup u should have gone to a vodoo guy earlier.....see what happens if u don't take ur medicines on time....irresponsible people

Must be a scam. They take it away, then give it back 6 months later. Must be a govt. thing. In the meantime, on coffee....

My friend knows someone who won 60k in court and spent it all. Even so, it's bloody unfair. Yeah.

Aha! So that's how you do it! Whyever did I not think to pick up my blue bib? Silly silly me. I think that you and Bobjim should write a poem together... I will give this a zero in the hope of getting it into the bottom 15 so everyone can read it. Selfish I know, but still...if you would like me to change it then just let me know. Good evening my good friend.

Excellent. I ran into a guy, said he inherited half a mil. He bought a car hauler,and he's driving it. What a dumb ass.

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what the hell is this about?

wwhy don't these ppl help kids in the hood or somethin......no cats r more important.....

Hey guys, she's having a major problem with line 4, do have any ideas for it? Suggestions are welcome, just don't insult the writer. Please and thankyou.

Not bad. Not quite as good as some of your other stuff. Oh well.

This makes me sad. It's nice to see such words to express this strange gratitude for life. Nice.