Dude, no.

Get lost

yup ur a wanker of the millenium nominee

Thanks........now where's the poem

Billy's got a gun.....just don't shoot urself

Bill u should get a REAL job soon and quit ur whining

So ur father still hunts or he quit and became an animal rights activist?.....hahaha

So we r supposed to believe this is a poem?........hahaha

Yup its a sad story man......cheer up....there's always other gals/guys/shemales or u can stick with her if u really love her

Best vilanelle I've seen on this site to date. As in the greats--"Do Not Go Gentle Into That Good Night" being the example that leaps foremost to mind--you make the structure feel natural and sensible instead of painfully forced. That isn't easy to do. That being said, I do have a small complaint. In the final two stanzas, the second line in each breaks from the established rhythm. "Parry" and "weary" are both stressed on the penultimate syllable, whereas every other line in the poem is stressed on the final syllable. Read it aloud; you'll hear it. Other than that, wonderful, wonderful.

I would sooner be found in bed stuck in Saddams arse by a CNN crew with my family watching then ever have to read that pile of contrived bowel leakage.

It looks to me like your in the wrong part of the service sector, retail will never pay. Unless you own several shops in which case you can bequeath large amounts of money to an ignorant kid who will blow it on a fast women and pink poo - which I guess is more fun than standing in a shop wearing shit shoes.

why don't u just jump off a cliff?...........hahaha

Please get a life or a sugardaddy to bang u slut....

Dats what I'm talkin 'bout!

Not bad.......keep up being a lowlife

How's ur therapy and sex addiction treatment going?....Doesn't seem to b working......should join a brothel soon

Reminds me of 'Lament' by Dylan Thomas, Sttl; check it out.

Cool as fcuk 8

i do