i like this one best. who is bobjim btw? do we know him at college?

This is wonderful! It's a shame nobody else has looked at it yet. I love it all. 10

Ive seen this one before too. it doesnt really speak to me im afraid

This is really good - did you make it all up yourself? (not that im doubting your abilities)

HELLO

very good! 8

iS THIS ABOUT Star Wars as well

GREAT 4 U,GREAT 4 ME,GREAT 4 PRIESTS.

I've just seen your profile and I think that you're the best teenage poet on this site! How's Florida at this time of year?

Hey Lunar, just noticed you're online too...can't stop cos I've got to go out, but I still think this one's great! 9

appropriate, dead center, and beautiful. i inaugurate the Voracious Ouroboros Awarde, granting it to you, for you willingness to augur with your own intestines. (even the fucking title eats itself)

Well done. I loved it,Poop is so like life. I feel you really got inside this one and made it your own, A fundimental way to look at life. KEEP T REAL MAN! 9

I thought as much. That will teach ya!

I have commented on lots of your poems that were similar to these but i see you like to reedit quite a lot and i forget what they were like in the first place! but this is funny and seriously random which is alwayys a good thing! X

Yourr poems are too good for me to understand im afraid im not into all this gramatically correct rhythem stuff - all your stuff is good and very well written you would find them in a book of poetry which is why i dont relate to them! X 8 tho

Not nearly enough zeros. At all. Here's one more for your count, though, young Bobby J.

And I thought you were joking about the whole sickness thing. How silly of me.

I know someone who has a yeast infection and they can't eat chocolate for a year. Ouch. I will give you an 8 out of sympathy. There you go, hope you get better soon.

I smoked the grass on the otherside and it was bedder doo.

Whos it about?