Sawa
on The Poet by wLeBlancw
24 Mar 2003, 9:22 PM
No wonder this one stood out to me. It's worse than the others, and probably because you DID write it.
Like, bathos and stuff, ewe, profound.
I like your poem. I don't know what that other comment is doing here.
Well I'll be fucked. Settle can write after all.
3, for your 3am excursion.
I'd only be too happy if you were at the bottom of the ocean. Alas you are here and thus have freedom to post clever pieces like this.
Null and void to put it lightly.
Informatively useless.
Oh, and not even remotely bizarre.
S-E_M_E_N. idiot. Oh, i'm sorry, my bad, that was you making a stab at humor? in that case 10! psyche.
"ADD testing" of course should be AIDS testing.
Thank god CNN will at least put an end to reality tv... And you too, we can only hope. (what's that now like seven poems i've ranked, and still i'm fucking in a state of permenant yawn here? Excuse me). This is shit, pure, stinky, three day old and rained on (several times) shit, sorry about your luck.
If you were in an auditorioum full of sinners reading this poem aloud... The clapping would be deafening. The tomatoes, ketchupping. You should be shot with a booger through a straw. I'd like to give you a break. I'd like to break about 7 and a half inches of hope off in your rump roast.
Here, hold this ( Bachus hands her a head of kale ) you need more calcium, apparently, along with some creative writing courses on how to not write creatively. Because, we're hoping you're just dyslexic.
Pinkbunny, I dont know why Jeremi pasted my comment left on the recent 'Oxywarmonger' by poetandknowit, it has nothing to do with me but sorry its found its way on to here, thats unfortunate.
I have read this poem and think its a good surreal poem, 8. I was surprised to see this plagiarixzed comment, once again apologies, speak to jeremi who pasted it.
THEY LIVED IN THE FOREST. THEY HID IN THE TREES. THEY WERE NAKED. THEY WERE GAY.
BUT HE WAS... THE HUNTER.
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Hey! Ironically I'm looking at the author of this poem right now pace around his house ranting like jesus about current affairs. We are stoned prophets, actually i'm at his house using his new computer and dropping off some wine, and tucking his son in because he feels that his bed time story would have been too tainted. what a nice daddy bachus is. I have a feeling though, if pushed further, he might start a new religion, or colonize uranus.
You do realize that you have some serious character flaws coupled by a horribly low self esteem. Lower even then a wheel chair with skateboard wheels.
I do not fuck gibbons. Ah, what the hell.
A few? try a lot. Also, it had to be doubled up. why? Exactly. I think that there should be a law against protestors that cannot fucking spell.
For instance;
We can't offord this war.
the world deserve piece.
Bush is the Eviledoinger.
Nobody likes a fucking cry baby.
I could think of 500 things that should have been protested in the last ten years that no one even fucking blinked at.
Fact, if i hear one more person say "well goddam they came over here and knocked down the blee blees. i'll vomit.
correction, stupid americans. iraq did not knock down the towers, in fact osama bin laden hates his fucking guts because sadam is a sell out muslim. a fake. he partys more then even me, and the only god he sees is in the mirror. granted both him and osama should be mutilated and dragged about by their intestines just because they are highly emotionally unstable fanatics that will kill americans because they hate jews? exactly, fuck the jews too, and even more so fuck bush and hia evangelical christian bullshit, the only thing he's got going for him is timing, has every fucking american in this country forgotten that because we are a democracy the worst that can happen is we'll have him for only another five years. were as with a dictatorship that's impossible. Now, by doing these things in the name of GOD! to begin with and maintaining it all in his good name straight through it? i have one thing to say. there is no god, and if there is. i'm fucking unimpressed to say the least.
Muslims are hive thinking stinky fucking yellow teethed followers.would you trust a person that has to rock back and fourth in order to read with weapons? i think not (egypt aside, because they are the only nuke free and chemical free muslim nation that gives a shit really)
Christians, of course, well why not love jesus? and not read the bible i'll let the guy up front read it to me at prayer group pot fucking luck evangelical sunday morning money gathering opportunists.
The jews? yeah, lets make our country in the middle of the largest most fanatical jew hating people that we can find? that was smart. oh but holy jerusalem is so fucking sacred? let them fight their own fucking fight (funnily enough though, i bet they never thought offing jesus would of brought around curious George a couple thousand years later to fix what the jews keep fucking up (asks yourselves a question why does every fucking race on this planet at one time or another try to extinguish this race? exactly, inbred, arrogant back stabbers that control the majority of the money and media, but hey, what the fuck they give us goys football to watch and just enough money left over from our checks to drink beer right?
and by the way, us normal americans somewhere in between, well we're just infidels, we're not the chosen special people like them. is anyone else but me getting the big picture here
FUCKKKING SICK oF THIS SHIT!
jews, muslims, catholics, christians, hindus and all the rest 'you know who you are' (buddists and taoists are cool though) they are all land hording money hungry counterproductve sheep fighting for nothing but barren fucking dirt and broken down shrines.
what a waste of fucking time.
God... whatever.
right now i'd like to cram every jew into saddams ass and have the seven hundred club their as witnesses then i'd like to drop the biggest bomb that my mind could invent on them, and forget about it. live is to short to live and die for a natural occuring force called god. God, people, makes fertilizer for the universe.