some deleted user
on some deleted poem
25 Mar 2003, 2:51 PM
that was fun
Did you kiss the toe gently and delicately, or violently and roughly? The poeme leaves this ambiguous.
What a delicately lovely effort, FA, particularly when contrasted with your 'about' user entry. I'd prefer 'To fly towards moon and the stars' since the former is closer to us.
What a delicately lovely effort, FA, particularly when contrasted with your 'about' user entry. I'd prefer 'To fly towards moon and the stars' since the former is closer to us.
I don't have anything really to say but out of the one's I've read today I think this is the best...it makes me think what tomorrow will bring=*(
Hart is a wild woodland deer ( or something).
Wow. Nice one.
No, really.
(my first (and probly only) compliment)
Someone once told me we're too young to fall in love...I think I'll go slap that someone now.
Desperate times calls for desperate measures, I think you should aim for Bachus, throw the kelp and not miss.
some deleted user
on some deleted poem
25 Mar 2003, 2:38 PM
fucking wanker
how did ya get to poemranker
i didn't think people like you
could read
right on
Profound and thought provoking. Excellent -10-
what the ///////////
Kinda reminds me of the first poem I wrote, My task, 8
I just wanted to comment on your poem, I found it rewarding to read a poem that expresses your thoughts in your own personal life. Good Job and keep writing
Marvelis you my be but I still doubt your Divinty -7-
Delete the comment jeremi left hes pasted it from a comment I LEFT on poetandknowits work, sorry for the inconvenience,
good work here by the way, I owe you some time in looking at more of yours as you have mine --8
You've taken the little things ignored and made a good effort to beautify certain private sacred moments of intimacy, think you can tweak this about a bit its good but i can see loads in here.
I just submitted one knowing some work is needed in parts, its weird how sometimes you can flow and create something really cool and other times the connection isnt there but the idea is,
nice job anyway sorry for woffling.
Why the fuck is this in the top 10?
WHACK SMACK PUSH BUGGER
STUPID TWAT