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on Oxywarmonger by poetandknowit
24 Mar 2003, 10:26 AM
I still can't believe those pirates beat all those robots.
What the hell is this? Woe is I?
"3am is the loneliest hour to shower." Just because it is late does that excuse you from the use of punctuation?
Whatever MAffy said he got one thing right, VAIN, you are a pisspoor attempt at being vain.
Feel free to delete my comment I am deleting all of yours PK why? because your a gobshite.
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha, you like doing that dont you.
fucking loser.
Too much acid. Your only suppose to eat one sugar cube at a time!!
Wow! Quick style change. I was looking forward to more gore. Or angst. -7-
Interesting work my good man, except for the list of your likely candidates. But, I'm surprised that after the months since I've last posted, people still remember me. Damn, did my poetry stink that bad?? If so, I can only say but one thing... F**K it. Have a nice day all :)
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5 anonymous blue votes do not make this a poem, as you once said - quote: you are truly the barbara courtland of poemranker.
what goes around comes around,
and trust me it will.
You insinuate that I am Maffy and you have also insinuated that Mr Pig is me on both counts that is childish and wrong.
Who the hell are you to say who I am?
As for that laughable remark regarding the so called fact that you voted me in to the top 15 that is total and utter bullshit and you know it. I challenge you to find one just one positive comment on any of my poems, you will not because you havent.
Also if you doid vote me in to the top 15 why not actually say something nice, how can I know you have left a good vote if you refrain from following it up with a comment, WHY ? I know why because you don?t want to say anything nice, for whatever reason, maybe the reason is you are incapable of being sincere, you are a hypocrite by saying I am a vote obsessive when YOU went on to the comments section of poemranker whining like a puppy about how pissed off you get at all the anonymous blue votes? As I say you are conceited, hypocritical prat who is so far up his own ass you can see last nights dinner up there.
As for bringing ranger into this how would you like it ? this is my beef with you, ranger has asked you many times to follow your critique on his work with your help because he respects your work.
And finally I couldn?t give a fuck about votes, so vote your little finger stained blue as many zeros as you like, I understand it?s a form of egotistical masturbation for you so send me your sddress and I?ll even throw in some vaseline to help you on your way.
If you are a better poet than me yeah that?s your opinion, I accept criticism but when dozens of other distinguished poets commend my work, you always berate it every single time and I believe you to be highly overrated and tedious. YOU HAVE THE LOWEST AVERAGE VOTE ON POEMRANKER ITS 1.87 THAT PROOVES YOU VOTE EVERYTHING YOU READ AS SHIT, EVEN THE WORST POEM ON POEMRANKER HAS A HIGHER MARK.
I feel sorry for you, you really need to get out more.
By the way the only thing swooning over you is that enormous dick thats on your head.
Wow, who turned out the punctuation?
You know a bar of soap is the prefered method of cleasing ones self but I love the gore that comes to mind. 'they just laughed' would have to be the most creepy line. The 'Now I'm pretty' Fits so perfectly and will probably make alot of people quesy.
BOORAH GRANDMA AWARD. -10-
i like this. i can relate to 'the emotionless one'. -8-
Hmmm... Amazing. I have given every below a 5 and above it but I have never read a peom that left me felling neutral towards it. So congrats you get my first -5-.
My work here is DONE
Ouch. Wow, Sorry blind I usually try to find the best in the works of others but this poem has no real heart, no ryhme, and just a slight dash of image. -0-
Ewww. Nothing against you but I thought it sucked.
Whatever MAffy said he got one thing right, VAIN, you are a pisspoor attempt at being vain.
Feel free to delete my comment I am deleting all of yours PK why? because your a gobshite.
ha ha ha ha ha ha ha, you like doing that dont you.
fucking loser.