spare and sweet

Hi,i would like to invite you to join my poetry group at Studencenter.org,if you are interested just tell me.

For a while I thought you might be giving up the rant-face. Glad you didn't. I feel sorry for her son. She seems incapable of anything of value.

dreams AND nightmares. aint it da truth

natiform.

Spider Man, is it the comic or the tv show!!!!

Flip it he can rip it any style you want.

'last breath of friendship' is a nice observation.

I loved part of this espeicially the opening lines full of vitriol and contempt - cool. However the types of people in america are here too in not so great britain. ...7 (

Reading this made me feel really pissed off i live in an industrialized crap hole of a city and I guess writing is inspired by where you live partly (maybe wholly) I know this though, I am changing and seek to seek myself by travelling, this poem made the hunger grow inside my belly full of butterflies and devour all of them for the short while I read it, hmmm definitely a poem that leaves an aftertaste. Its provoked a big reaction from me and I feel depressed. Good work GW, ( I am sighing ) xxx cad !

bitches in heat ( great name for a rock band )

Hope you get what you want

I'm Impressed Mr Foster 8

Well Done this is a grand poem, love the opening, ahhh opening I need one with my job 8

Wheres Dale Winton>

wonderful wordings from within.

while you are asleep?

mmm, yummy. This is one of the few poems I've ever read which made me wish there was a version on video.

Oh, I like this. This is how I often feel about words, I feel like I want to punish the actual words themselves as if they had some punishable sentience.

nifty! (add "madly" to line 2 'n' it'd scan better)