i can see these hues.

It was so long ago, I'm unaware of the changes. Feels strong still.

This seems unfinished mate, I was left scrapping for more, or maybe I am greedy today? gotta feel that lurve thang ! Hey H, give me the goss on what you've been up to : endymion29@hotmail.com You know everythhing from Magnum ads, Beverly D-angelo, being pissed, california gossip beats coventry gossip, man I live in a shithole of a city.

feels like a stream of memory still blaring.

ee cummings come uppens!

i too am a sucker for illiterations, and you are there!

all the hoopla is well deserved

There once was some aids in a Newbie, Who suckled it out of a Doobie. In terror he cried, "Oh no! I shall die! And I've never seen any Boobies!"

if you weren't crippled and counting herpes i'd stick your fucking organ up your ass without your trusty shoehorn james. 4 wheeldrive is better then two.

GQT AWARDE 10!

yes, shit don't mean shit.

THank god jesus slept in my poppies. All fucking night.@

this would be true if you could keep your tie from getting caught in your spokes.

harvest this

Wow this is up there on the laughometer with 'Zombie Flesh Eaters' by the way I want more of those man, And please correct me on any grammar you usually do and my greasy spoon was littered with them, I corrected them thanks.

Geko, undeniably, pain inspires us to write hard-hitting poetry the most, therefore I am able to tolorate the mostly senseless swearing and depressings tones. Awesome stuff, you're really talented.

I really really like this one. The rhyme scheme is different at the end so it draws your attention to it more. Well done once again.

Impressive, love the images in this 'A chalky ashen ball', Dario Argento used a nice line for dead eyes: four flies on grey velvet, you got a Q TiP aWaRdE ask him to say what 4, vote(9)

Get A title for this, that gives the reader a big idea what its about. A good title would be : The Shedding? Idea: (trees dont panic) so .... the tree shakes and rips, As the wind whistles in glory, Death is inevitable. Play around with it, you know you'll get it.

fun.