INTRANSIT
on venttent3 by Crakyamuni
8 Mar 2003, 2:36 PM
venting well. some spelling errs. find em. fix em. that is all.
go home and get your meat. if you dont go home and eat your meat you will end up with no pudding love.
Clever
true true
Poorly written and dull. You probably smell.
razorgrin
on Shouldn't have said anything(please critique and comment) by TrulyUnique0642
8 Mar 2003, 7:35 PM
Don't worry sweetie. They're just too good for you, is all. zitface.
Freethinker1602
on I cannot take this shit(please comment and critique) by TrulyUnique0642
8 Mar 2003, 7:33 PM
Hehehe. This seems to be a story that repeats itself in adolescence...Get laid.
well actually here go off on rage it might help
Get bent
Eat Shit
Fuck off
Go rot
Freethinker1602
on Shouldn't have said anything(please critique and comment) by TrulyUnique0642
8 Mar 2003, 7:31 PM
Hey. Saying things is what allows us the freedom to acknowledge that we think. I mean. Would you rather have a person you care about shrouded in seemingly harmless dilusions? Or to know that they are enlightened. I'm happier just because some one made me realise that I don't have to hang around ppl to have friends. I'm thankful that I discovered this
I can stand the thought of mine being with another girl... I want him to. We each wasted such a valuable time of our lives. Stop crying. I mean, it won't help. Once you figure out what you want then you can cry. Just keep looking. Stop focusing on one person
yeah man. I know what you mean by it. Yet think. Love just isn't worth it. Well maybe in your case lust....hey what would a paid whore know? Just kidding. But a paid whore would know. I mean they make their living on not loving.
i think the way this poem kinda leaves you hangin is wierd, but i think i like it!!
hahaha a dying rose talk about gutted how much more cliched can you get not much I'd say 10
Tuesday doesn't work for you? If I move my tae-bo and my luncheon with Mao, I can push the invasion to next Wed. Is that better? good. never put off til tomorrow.....
ass hair. lol. that puts things in perspective doesn't it?
I feel like even the best of ku is shit sometimes.
a nude pillow fight was in order! Next time due this while playing quarters..
Line six needs a little work but besides that i really like it alot!!
This is a great poem, it actually means something, unlike most of the solipstistic bullshit on this site. You must have a daughter yourself to understand this. However, you've left out a 'to' - it should be 'too young to see the lesson'.
whoa...