explain, please. is this a fetish of yours? won't you let me in? (i'm not a chap. erg.)

NOT FOR ME BUT ITS POILISHED SO HERES A 6

yeah, verily. you have struck upon it. voices. i hear voices.

I TOO HAVE A GRATING BRICK THAT I LAID ABOUT AN HOUR AGO

Great theme. I love the voice of your poem. Friendship is rarely combined with heroism, and originality is what kicks. Great poem. Keep up the good work.

Settle's astronaut poem was much better. Bless him. 3.

your tone changes between "there he fell' and "Is that cocks have no style'. be consistent! also: men's--apostrophe. line "Cocks are so ugly," is unnecsessary; explicate instead of tell. first few lines--metaphor is outstanding.

nice one. why not "life and death--same page" for proper syllabel count? why break form, without purpose?

i guess the act of writing is a defiance of pessimism? i don't know. the musicians are drinking there too; and the painters, the gardeners, the doctors. let the poet here be everyman, crying: no one can take this rosary from me; words are my cross and my salvation.

You create good points, but you use stereotypes which are not needed. And what's really uneccessary is puting usernames at the bottom. Let them deal with their own poetry and you your's. I see you want whats best for the world of poetry, and what's best is letting the creativity of the world flow into one. That way. Poetry can't die. You have talent. Use it for a theme more useful.

Haiku limits words that are needed for emotion. But on the other hand the theme was excellent. Try using what you learned in English, it could help. But who am I to tell you? Do what you want, you're writing is great without me.

THE FILM WAS CRAP BUT THIS IS NOT BAD 6

THINGS THAT COME TO MIND. 1) BACK SEAT 2) 2 HORNY TEENS 3) A POPCORN BAG WITH A HOLE AT THE BOTTOM PLACED ON HIS LAP. 4) DARLING WOULD YOU LIKE SOME POPCORN 5) SHE SCREAMS 6) WANK 7) YOUR VOTE - 7 AND GOD I BET YOUR HORNY

this rocks 10

I WOULD APPRECIATE YOUR DAMNATION OF MY WORK, IT SUCKS LIKE A HOOKER AND I NEED CLOSURE ON MY POETRY I THINK I OWE IT TO LITERATURE TO STICK TO ART WHICH I DONT SUCK AT...PLEASE MR POET N KNOW IT, TELL ME TO TORCH THEM

STANZA 1 I WILL REMEMBER ALL DAY, ABSOLUTELY WICKED, AWESOME (unlike my poetry i really suck man)

ENOUGH WITH THE CANNIBALISM, FUCKING POSEURS. I ONCE ATE HUMAN FLESH BECAUSE I WAS TRICKED AND IT ISN'T FUCKING FUNNY.

It's worth mentioning that you should never do anyone a favour so great that you cannot think of a way they could repay you.

Oh dear no I've embarassed myself.

YEAH YOU SLATE THE LITTLE FUCKWITS