I could love you.

I REALLY LIKED THIS

FUCK OFF, LAME EFFORT

NAUGHTY NAUGHTY MAN ! BUT I LIKED MANY LINES IN THIS, VERY GOOD 9

TOUCHING

Thou art brilliant, m'love. I know it's an accepted fact, but it bears repeating occasionally. 'Flesh tears' alone gets you a ten. I don't think I know anyone but you who could use blood quite so much in one stanza and get away with it.

nicely done

Please go away

extremly clever

looks like vogon poetry to me

what color is the sky on your planet

Kewl poem, gave a good mental pic. keep writin..

Beauty as ever my dear friend.

robert k frost connotations too

Deer don't come in fields. I don't know what the word is, but it isn't field.

an imbalance of water and fire in this poem drowns it. get some air, and look at it, fresh.

nice work. replace the 7th line's simile with metaphor. You know I am dmzoacan, Lord Ganus, orangeprawne, Settle, RGallet and Jeremi, right?

More lines about amputees.

damn those orange leaves!! however, i don't thing they are the crux of the problem.

Well done. one misspelling: reparing: unless you meant they were shaving it down again, it should be repairing.