Re: Bagni di Lucca by Sasha	Ranger 62.252.32.15	6-Nov-06/9:46 AM
I'll trust you to have got the translation right. Is this a form of sonnet?
regarding some deleted poem...	amanda_dcosta 61.17.226.198	6-Nov-06/6:35 PM
teenborg, how come you vote for yourself?
Re: Dovina & Co by amanda_dcosta	amanda_dcosta 61.17.226.198	6-Nov-06/6:50 PM
Hi everyone. Sorry for the silence, but I'm back now. Hope to see you all more often.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 64.140.227.175	7-Nov-06/9:26 AM
For a person who seems to have a way with words its to bad you could'nt put them to better use.
regarding some deleted poem...	some deleted user 64.140.227.175	7-Nov-06/9:29 AM
Poems about cat sit drive me insane.
Re: The Hunter, the Hunted, and the Bystander by Dovina	some deleted user 64.140.227.175	7-Nov-06/9:43 AM
The poem works for me except for "tiger's mouth"--I think with your talent you could find a better simile. Good work overall though--as usual.
regarding some deleted poem...	Sasha 128.135.197.215	7-Nov-06/5:53 PM
You're kidding, right? If you're going to use archaisms, at least have the sense to know how to use them. "Doth," whose usefulness died with the last perfunctory wannabe romantic, is a singular form of "do" and therefore cannot have a plural subject. "Where rats doth go" makes you sound nothing but pretentious. Anyone who rhymes death with breath is really not adept with verbal gymnastics. "I fear" is the most forced of rhymes in this poem, closely by "snow/go/so"
regarding some deleted poem...	amanda_dcosta 61.17.21.153	8-Nov-06/1:04 AM
Stephen, you're pathetic. When will you ever stop.
Re: Bagni di Lucca by Sasha	howl 81.178.72.28	8-Nov-06/2:51 AM
and how does one go about translating daft formatting?
regarding some deleted poem...	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	8-Nov-06/3:23 AM
This sort of service is commonplace in the Near East. Quite how a country can possibly hope to operate a civilised society without the customer service standards imposed by Which? magazine and the Watchdog T.V. programme are quite beyond me.
Re: Dovina & Co by amanda_dcosta	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	8-Nov-06/3:24 AM
You make me want to puke.
Re: Bagni di Lucca by Sasha	INTRANSIT 205.188.117.10	8-Nov-06/6:12 AM
Ranger, Howl? Why the eights?
Re: Accusation by INTRANSIT	Ranger 62.252.32.15	8-Nov-06/11:04 AM
This is good
regarding some deleted poem...	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.203.196	8-Nov-06/12:58 PM
I thought this was excellently well written and a great description of a mighty trouser snake trying to get a slice of the action. A well deserved 10/10 and ignore the previous naff comments; these people have no taste.
regarding some deleted poem...	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.203.196	8-Nov-06/1:02 PM
Before using foreign words, you need to have just a TEENY knowledge of the language involved. And you don't. 0/10 as a reward for combining ignorance, pretension and lack of humour.
Re: Water Red by InWonderLand	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.203.196	8-Nov-06/1:03 PM
Laughably bad.
regarding some deleted poem...	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.203.196	8-Nov-06/1:05 PM
Perhaps you should be posting this on a different website. Anyway what do you expect going on a common package tour at cheapo prices?
Re: Bagni di Lucca by Sasha	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.203.196	8-Nov-06/1:06 PM
I have been to the baths at Lucca. They were out of soap at the time so I had to make do with a tinkle.
Re: Dovina & Co by amanda_dcosta	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.203.196	8-Nov-06/1:07 PM
There seems to be some friendly badinage I am missing out on here. The poem is crap.
regarding some deleted poem...	Edna Sweetlove 85.210.203.196	8-Nov-06/1:09 PM
A graceful member of the family were thee This should be ......wert thou. As someone else said, don't use language you don't understand. Nothing is worse than ignorant affectation.