regarding some deleted poem...	howl 81.179.214.34	8-Nov-06/1:45 PM
Well my plane was late and no one was telling me where it was so I went looking for it. I thought the runway was as good a place to look as any and blow me down it was there. The plane was delayed the toilets didn't work no one was telling me anything and the damn plane was just stood there on the runway. -10-
regarding some deleted poem...	teenborg 62.60.98.133	8-Nov-06/2:32 PM
Yes Edna- well spotted- my French has become rather rusty.
Re: Dovina & Co by amanda_dcosta	Dovina 72.234.150.12	11-Nov-06/12:25 PM
If a Company can have a heart, then its eyes can have despair, and you can look there and say, "It will survive." Some eyes have faith, others hope, others love. And you know which is greatest.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 72.234.150.12	11-Nov-06/12:37 PM
What tripe! Dull! :( And "insult to injury" !!! Why not say "hanky panky" while you're at it.
Re: Accusation by INTRANSIT	Dovina 72.234.150.12	11-Nov-06/12:44 PM
Yes, poor poor man. He has no choice, always accused for what he is. Cut him up, girls; each take a piece. Really, this says it quite well.
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 72.234.150.12	11-Nov-06/12:48 PM
Since you're writing a philosophical position or hypothesis or devotion, a thing I am often accused of, I'll tell you what they invariably tell me Use poetry! Forget the discourse. Just tell them where to go.
Re: I always Win by InWonderLand	Dovina 72.234.150.12	11-Nov-06/12:50 PM
Do you think switching upper and lower case is cute? It's not. This needs more thought about what it says.
Re: forgotten by the indign	Dovina 72.234.150.12	11-Nov-06/1:21 PM
Cut out half the words for starters. Then see if there's some intresting way to way it.
Re: POT OF THE POET by stevopoet	Dovina 72.234.150.12	11-Nov-06/1:31 PM
It's a lot of words about poetry strung together withour much of a point. I suppose it's clever, but not very.
Re: In a Church by Sasha	Dovina 72.234.150.12	11-Nov-06/1:47 PM
It's a good poem, I suppose, at least a good poem in translation. Couldn't you improve the meter though, and not lose the meaning. i.e.: Star candles in the people’s hands, a bit of tallow for Madonna. Each a gift, a silent prayer, a secret keeping holy honor.
Re: Mind of One by justjay	Dovina 72.234.150.12	11-Nov-06/1:52 PM
This has potential, but think about "Spinning around in circles that no one has ever imagined." What does it really mean? is it true? Does it really add anything to your theme? Also consider the grammar throughout; is it better to follow the rules?
regarding some deleted poem...	Dovina 72.234.150.12	11-Nov-06/2:09 PM
Sorry, I only meant to devastate your vestigial manhood. It seems that in addition I've scared the crap out of you.
Re: My heart belongs to you by creepshow	pollywolly 80.192.5.87	12-Nov-06/12:13 PM
the real tragedy you write of here is the pain love causes. how can something which is so wonderful to have cause so much pain. i guess poetry is a good way to find that answer
Re: To My Love by Lola	pollywolly 80.192.5.87	12-Nov-06/12:20 PM
i like this short piece. has the lines "no promises, no demands" which are also lyrics from a song on the topic of love with no promises, nice
Re: In a Church by Sasha	Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.52	13-Nov-06/9:53 AM
Religious bollox.
Re: Edna's Lovely World Cup Poem by Edna Sweetlove	Engelbert Humpalot 194.154.22.52	13-Nov-06/9:56 AM
This gives me mixed feelings; football is working class trash, so if I praise the poem, am I praising football?
Re: Three Worlds by Dovina	amanda_dcosta 61.17.227.34	13-Nov-06/6:43 PM
D... It's surprising how you rhyme your lines. It's so unusual of you. Apart from that, its sad to see that PR is heart broken.
Re: Three Worlds by Dovina	Ranger 62.252.32.15	14-Nov-06/5:43 AM
'Weasel doing in the goose'? That's too much Brixton at 3am for me. Either that, or it means something which I dread to imagine. Stanza 4 is really good. I'm surprised that you didn't include the recurring images (river/brook, weasel/goose, sun) in stanza 2 though. Line 9 misses the rhythm - could do with fixing. The rhymes work well though.
regarding some deleted poem...	Ranger 62.252.32.15	14-Nov-06/5:48 AM
www.travelreportranker.com is in dire need of your talents.
Re: Three Worlds by Dovina	Stephen Robins 213.146.148.199	14-Nov-06/9:07 AM
Christ's chin if that is a portent to the current state of your ewok we are all doomed.