The forty nights were spent in the desert months before the resurrection. Again the title doesn't jive for me. I think the haiku works very well intil the last line. Too preachy. Tell me something nuetral at the end, to give the blood more power.

Watch it I know Arthur Walding.

On the plus side, you've now got two comments for your effort.

fantastic - almost biblical, yet strangely crappy.

This is profound, but CAN YOU FUCKING COUNT FOR THE UPTILIANTH TIME 18 18 18 18 IT NEEDS TO BE 17 17 17 . NOW this is a choice haiku. lose the AS inh S2, and i'll ten it many times taking you into the mid sixes 666 (i have lobbyists abroad on the hill, see).

I like it, Zzin. I was stuck at Timberline, WV, ski resort with 10 housemates; officially: 46 inches of snow in 3 1/2 days. I concur, cabin fever has no pity.

What if the earth consmes the sun after it has turned into a red dwarf, naturally than the earth breaks solar wind? groovy.

By the way I was just perusing Mr Horus work and his website and my oh my what a handsome prince he is. My darling other half made me feel most unattractive and one was not amused, I always have Enid from the dales though who finds me most fanciful and dandy.

Here's an interesting question for you, Garrett S Sexton: Do disableds have feelings? Or are they just soulless slabs of jellied meat with wheels attached?

Ding Dong, I say ! this is wonderful. But... My dear 'Obstinate' is the correct spelling however. 'There is love to be made' fits perfectly like a glove, and its such a pleasure to read such profoundly alluring poetry, my darling I salute you and kiss your fragrant hand that velvets the page with your genial brush of passion. I know you must tire of the countless requests to read ones work, but if you would oblige me your opinion on the trilogy of haikus I have compiled I would be most honoured, Thank you In advance. ...9...

Enjoyable, to say the least. Does a villanelle have any particular syllable structure or rhythm or anything?

It's nice to know you are out of the closet, Georgie boy. A bit too american for my taste.

Um, are you Settle or Dark Angel or someone completely different?

Hey, I'm in Centreville, VA, and am trying to understand your poem. Is it aimed at religious money raisers on TV? My least favorite religion is the Mormons, but they're outta Utah.

Boring and too long

Glorious. 8 for humour value

first line was mighty mighty boss tones, the last line unfortunately, was not.

Hmmm, it was the jews who laughed, the romans were completely uninterested. I prefer blood to wine, though the tie in with supper is a good one. The title invokes a different scene. Right a haiku about the action in the title, keep this one and give it a different title. Judas is one of my favorite characters in this myth. Keep exploring him. Have you seen The Last Temptation of Christ?

Horus is right!

I love a happy ending. Top marks to the Butlins camper.