Nice Indeed.

I like the edit except for st. 6. I gave you a ten last time and stanza 3 more than equals that.

Wow... I thought that I'd never agree with D.A. but please do shut up.

Not nearly as funny as other works of yours. May I ask who you get your inspiration from?

Technically this is fine. I personally don't like the content. Maybe poetry is supposed to evoke a reaction, but I guess that explains my rating.

I'm amazed you can even tie your shoes, let alone concentrate all of your magical powers to bury the east coast in a blanket of your racist demeanor. pickle chin.

Okay don't look it up. Whatever flips your pancake.

You can thank me for the ten in person, with chives.

Ohhhhhhh. Jesus christ.

brrrrrrrrill.

Oh, you. 9.

Furcke...

Can i play this one to some chord patterns i got laying around? you shoulde hear what i did with da's the croutchlinge.

Nice images, but strikes me as a personal remembrance, or at least one I don't have personal context for.

Superb(e)!

Wonderful. 8

Perfect, again.

This needs work."Curse my name on public streets" is a good line, however, the one that follows makes me think of obscene phone calls.

Pretty damn good.

sounds like militant angst.