Tintagiles
on some deleted poem
22 Jan 2003, 7:10 PM
I'd really rather not.
This is not a sonnet.
You need a nice tight pair of hemp underwear.
heretic.
For I belong to a hell called yesterday.
Good line
Tanya? This is a fact. There are between 100,000 and 1,000,000 various writing forums on the web. Why did you choose
this one? Especially since YOU ARE NEITHER A POET, NOR A WRITER (All capitalized for emphasis not excitement).
Then ask yourself why you stay? Exactly. Stalker. Or even yet why keep your user name? any sane person would of
recreated themselves to learn about poetry by now..shedding the shadow of the ornella stink that you waift in. Simply
rename yourself, shutup, be civil...and learn without fucking with the people who are actually here to write about things
other than your detestment of me, your addiction to soda, and moderately interesting trivia facts. If you are trying to do
what Bachus, Blade, and da, settle, katie, and other poemranker veterans who do alot of jabbering do 'creatively'..what you
forget is those writers in all actuality...use those characters in an ingenius ways to branch off into areas of writing that their
other user names wont allow them to, because of sterotyping by avid readers. but, regardless, on all accounts of my lecture.
You are miserably beyond hope no matter how one sums it up. Ps. if you plan on approaching acting in LA. like you did
poetry. You're fucked.
since you enjoyed it so much.
some chow-chow, would get me there quicker.
Tanya? This is a fact. There are between 100,000 and 1,000,000 various writing forums on the web. Why did you choose
this one? Especially since YOU ARE NEITHER A POET, NOR A WRITER (All capitalized for emphasis not excitement).
Then ask yourself why you stay? Exactly. Stalker. Or even yet why keep your user name? any sane person would of
recreated themselves to learn about poetry by now..shedding the shadow of the ornella stink that you waift in. Simply
rename yourself, shutup, be civil...and learn without fucking with the people who are actually here to write about things
other than your detestment of me, your addiction to soda, and moderately interesting trivia facts. If you are trying to do
what Bachus, Blade, and da, settle, katie, and other poemranker veterans who do alot of jabbering do 'creatively'..what you
forget is those writers in all actuality...use those characters in an ingenius ways to branch off into areas of writing that their
other user names wont allow them to, because of sterotyping by avid readers. but, regardless, on all accounts of my lecture.
You are miserably beyond hope no matter how one sums it up. Ps. if you plan on approaching acting in LA. like you did
poetry. You're fucked.?
Tanya? This is a fact. There are between 100,000 and 1,000,000 various writing forums on the web. Why did you choose
this one? Especially since YOU ARE NEITHER A POET, NOR A WRITER (All capitalized for emphasis not excitement).
Then ask yourself why you stay? Exactly. Stalker. Or even yet why keep your user name? any sane person would of
recreated themselves to learn about poetry by now..shedding the shadow of the ornella stink that you waift in. Simply
rename yourself, shutup, be civil...and learn without fucking with the people who are actually here to write about things
other than your detestment of me, your addiction to soda, and moderately interesting trivia facts. If you are trying to do
what Bachus, Blade, and da, settle, katie, and other poemranker veterans who do alot of jabbering do 'creatively'..what you
forget is those writers in all actuality...use those characters in an ingenius ways to branch off into areas of writing that their
other user names wont allow them to, because of sterotyping by avid readers. but, regardless, on all accounts of my lecture.
You are miserably beyond hope no matter how one sums it up. Ps. if you plan on approaching acting in LA. like you did
poetry. You're fucked.
sorry, h.
we all hate you now.
ornella convinced us that you are bad.
hear that tanya? you win! you can go away now; we don't like him any more.
have a nine for your poem, well, because i know.
Thank you for your kind words. I will not forget you. You've been wonderful! Thank you Jeremi for entering my life and bringing me so much joy, love, beauty, kindness, and happiness. You've truly shown me the way.....
i like it! lots of emotion and feeling, true poetry
Virgin whore? Really? You mean you take it up the ass?
I love it--- especially
"as she breathes/through chapped lips/so perfect."
I think this is very good, outside of the fact that you fan lunatics...i do believe deep down. that ewoks are extremely eye catching creatures to say the least.
this reminds me of this london rapper who's big on kcrw out here.
he doesn't realy rap, but he talks sort of cool and different to the beats..nice one.r
Decent read until "Satan pooh-poohed". I wasn't sure what the intended purpose was there: so I just laughed. Sorry.
Haha..9..
shit.