Good stuff.

Kind of agree with mr p&k. Even so it looks promising as a song-nice one!

sounds like Cadacus.

Definitely not in your top ten. "Doom and gloom", "Cuts the silence", "poisons my blood like parasites", "saints and sinners": weak and cliched language.

Good work, scitz, good work!

Interesting spelling and use of grammar.

Oh dear, scitz, you crack me up yet again...9! And yes, ewoks do kick ass (if they can reach, that is!)

the only thing that can make women feel lonelier than a vibrator...is a man

Hey p&k. I'm here merely to deliver a message from the delightfully saucy miss limonade. She says goodbye, and that she doesn't love you anymore. She told me to tell you. That and she's not coming back.

seems you are nearing the end with this. I still prefer the otra title.

small stainlees scoop of happiness.

a hairy Brazillian? Where the hell do Brazillian waxes come from then? A painful experience indeed. Hahaaaaaaa....you always make me laugh....8

nothing like a self destructive mom eh? mine? alcoholism,53. alkie breath is pretty gross too.

A mans sole purpose in life is to produce sperm......but we now have sperm banks. What is our use?

I was going to buy a magazine for the gossip, but fuck it I've saved ?2.50 thanks everyone. I'm constantly in touch with my feminine side since I had the chop, take a chill pill pill daffodils this is poemranker not commentranker, people are getting murdered, married, jiggy while we polish the horns of the devil on out shoulder. I'm shit at poetry but good at being shit.

Check : vulgar peoples. Oh, and pray hard.

Sounds like something better suited in a journal, but I see it was a young attempt.

Whoa cowboy, save some of the passion for the next time. Don't spend it all in one place. Is this a 'serious' poem, would you like it to be? It needs to be more sincere is all.

big time doesn't scan

My name is Maximus Desimus Meridius Commander of the armies of the north General of the felix legions Loyal servant to the true emporer Marcus Aurelius. Father to a murdered son, husband to a murdered wife, and I will have my vengeance, in this life or the next.