ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. cool. thanks.looks very promising.thanks.

Be careful how you apply the pain mind you...I'm sure you know the one about the bloke in the shed...the nails in his foreskin...the cup of coke...the rats...*shudder*

I second that with a rollicking 'No'

I enoyed this, despite not know what a vilanelle was. I will endeavor to find out. Now I just have, it is worth 10 because villanelles are buggeringly difficult to do, and you have done one which surpasses expectations, I imagine.

Since I will not be coming to this site ever (and I do keep my word) I will not hear your bright respnses.

This is magnificent, sir. Many congratulations to you! I will hereby grant you a nine and stop this strangely pretentious speech of mine etc. etc.

You suck like sink-holes Like muck Pulling everything under. You're so good At saying absolutely nothing Keep yourself under observation Keep yourself stocked with your own prescriptions To keep you flying low.

and of course we can't leave you with probably one of the best if not thee best concrete poem here on poemranker..good night..thanks for watching..<the witches hut, brought to you by 'underwear' what you need when under the weather, and 'forkie' better then spoonie any day..>

Looks like some dilrod was peeing on the wall here..well well..he's still here..hey! fucker what gives with the six? hiee yah! <baba kicks it three feet off of the ground square in the nuts> that's right mother fucker i mean serious shit fucker...unless you got the chops scat lest i whoop on yea a bit....capeesh? 10! oh yeah...what commercial do you hate and what's your favourite cereal?

What's your favourite color, number,book,letter, aDDRESS? nah just kidding..i do highly suggest t-rex though..ummm. back to poetry.. yeah..so what's your favourite movie? ha ha! i'm drunk sorry Fuck..you liTTLE SHIT BRING A FUCKING MARTINI AHHHHHHHHH! a tiny tender rapscallion fetches it6 quickly..i'm momentarily soothed.. soo z..ahhh where did you get your user name from? a twist on the tv character? if i was larry rivers..i'd lick your but..i'm an aniMALLLL! WELL aCTUALLY a russian witch in the off limit area of siberia

sorry about that..had to go play "who wants to be a million heir..would you believe..they shorted me about 900,000.00.. cock suckers..so if you had three wishes what would they be..?

ahhh.shit.i'm a dirty bastard? nahh one time at a bon fire my friend put a can of spray paint in the embers without me knowing...scared the shit out of me... what scares you? what's your favourite myth?

probably one of my specials in times of need...and that concludes our visit with z. tonight..i leave you with t-rex singing debora, that is all.thanks for watching..oh debora..always dressed like a conjurer! 10. good night!

Such a lovely coincidence. "Striped and strung" oh yes, I am quite the masochist. I will print this, and place it neatly in my pocket, and when they find as limp as noodle, it will be their only clue.

and then the awkward dawn comes, alarming you like some stressed out mother, pulling apart the blinds with an unnecessary clamor, telling you you'rre late for school.

It's not nice to show the war you're living inside.

No. No.

Possibly I should say it again? No.

A chilling vision... makes us sinners cringe

i was busy here..let me take a look. talk to you tomorrow.