not bad

Like the others, I am new to the definition of villanelle. The content is excellent. not sure it's a perfect villanelle. Contact someone smarter than I. 8

who knew baby seals could be such tongue-tripping mind-fucking fun?

Do you now?

Lots of it too, hard to imagine serpents getting their leg over. Their is a point to this tell me what it is because i'm high on anaesthetic?

Cool poem dude

vhat vas good shit

Whether or not this is about some one matters not, to me. I wish I could comment on this with some form of intelligence. Being that iI can't, I like it.

Loved the bit about you watching him eat, and his jaw etc etc. This is a piece about observation and beautifying the little moments we forget about. John Lennon said something about it once Can anyone remember? +10

Loved the bit about you watching him eat, and his jaw etc etc. This is a piece about observation and beautifying the little moments we forget about. John Lennon said something about it once Can anyone remember? +10

shit for brains, your a disgrace to yourself, your mother and poemranker-0

Loved the copyright, nice touch to otherwise a poem that has the IQ of Pamela Anderson 3

holy damn.that is truly mighty. you do know your kung fu.

I cast power word: Kill.

nyet.

you sir, are the discarded molt of a milk snake.

lines 3+4 are cumbersome

cool.

rhyme scheme, OK but the rhythm is amiss. a fine poem, but not really limericky.

Surely virtual sex isn't as good as the real thing now, is it? Try masturbation.