smlink84
on Surreal... by Yardbird
16 Jan 2003, 9:25 PM
Wow, What are you?
here once again we have mutant x doing everything but mutating. do not attempt to read this shite at home children..it may cause temporary drooling and tart walking.
Pathetic
Why do you write?
Reminds me of Frost
Here we have some uknown newbie (realy an oldbe masking) making us that much more stupid than any of us realy deserve to be..PoeT MsAter was it? why don't you die home skillet? 0. that's not a request either.
Now here we have an interesting young poet with quite the growing body of great work. different, brave..willing to take chances, yet carrying a sweet and well educated grasp of the english language. an a real fine user name..one of poemrankers emerging young poeties of the future <New Life Drug> [like three crickets chirp, and some drunk chick farts in the back row] nevermind them kid horus says to new life..they're kinda slow. 8!
She pops up regularly.like those over played pop songs that she hijacked these words from, could be original, could be pilfered..who knows, who dares? 5 for staying alive ah ah ah ah. and the bee gees (which stands for brothers gibb, by the way}k
yes even occassionally poemranker has station identifications from the emergengy broadcast system..sorry about that. and no. he's not the sheriff, or smokey the bear.he was the airconditioning guy out of freon and drunk, we had to let him go. 0.
yes we do care! no. we can't do a fucking thing about it..let me no when you got the perp in a line up..i'll come hold your hand..see no kids, you can't give a poet like thoughtful soul a bad score cuz they meant well, so you have to do the 6 thing..you know what i mean?
What????????
You are depressing and you make no sense.
<yes ladies and gentlemen it's time for that all around infectious bastard once again horus8 [crowd pelts him with joints and g-strings he motions his hands for a hushing effect] good evening poets and frauds it's time for 'random encounters' the only show on poem ranker that allows us to dig into the amateur files, to remember the poets we've lost, and to find the poets we'll need to remember..that undiscovered poet could be you> here we see mutant x taking a wild stab at teenage love and the inevitable bitter seperation of highschool sweethearts, and 'wrist slashing' let's just be friends. 6.
Taro?
Point well made, only You don't have a clue of what you are talking about
i like he idea, but remember "Pride before fall"
Here we have athena..and to think she graduated from northwestern with a degree in graphic design, and a minor in creative writing..Not to creative though kiddo, hence the wanker award (which is veiwed as an accomplishment to the disturbed) so you young poets take this as a lesson..don't wank with other peoples material, because it might wank you back! [therefore she get the motionless 5{even worse than the zero}. next/
Gross.
Pointless gibberish.