god'swife
on alienheart by Bill Z Bub
15 Jan 2003, 12:20 AM
A mish-mosh.
Who is the woodsman? Are you saying I have no morals?
poemwanker
on Clever Device? This is how you hunt angels with an Ashton Kirchner dude where's my car tattoo and legos by horus8
15 Jan 2003, 12:49 AM
Yessssssey! Ten for you sir.
Explore.
Not Nelly! That's news!
sweet.
Tabernac.
Spot the Looney.
Quite fine. Did you ever get to fuck the Language Arts teacher. Were you scandalous? Too shy right, too stupid to make a move.
Oh, poor, poor Shane-y!
And a description of yourself, good sir?
This poem seriously rocks, however I'm not 100 per cent sure that the TV references etc do work-even so, I can't really see anything else working so all I can say is "nice one!". 9
I especially liked the second stanza(the best one in my mind).The concluding question proper enough.I liked the Epic Tone of the poem.well-written.and I don't see what a poem is to be condemned beacuse of some mind's deterministic(restrained)attitudes!9
Outstanding, your my favourite poet on this site, wild, evocative and exciting. I could see you even writing stage plays your original with a twist of tim Burton, If you succeed in poetry - poetry succeeds as an art thats the highest compliment I have paid on this site and I wish you all the frankincense and myrr $$$$$ you can get. (10)
The trick is not to let it come to a boil. Neither soup, nor jello, nor gravy. Heat it through, but do not scald. You must stand at attendance, with the flame at low-medium. Then when the steam begins to rise from the rim, take it off the heat and cover. Perfect, I never have served an unsightly dish.
The last stanzas a beauty. All in all I certainly understand. I get it, so for that a long withheld 10.
After 3 reads, I think I get it. Brilliant. 100.
Another adverbial clause. They are everywhere. You know, Intransit, I am proud of you. You are up to 13 poems now and have yet to pull them all off.
Very well written.
:-)