Ranger
on Fuck by Bobjim
15 Jan 2003, 5:22 AM
NOOOOO! The last line isn't complete!
What the fuck? Who is that?
I'm cracking up i read your poem and thought exactly what gods wife said, so did you? you smoothie you. By the way this is quite beautiful it enchanted me, you have many sides to your die and most are sixes -9-
cleverdevice
on Clever Device? This is how you hunt angels with an Ashton Kirchner dude where's my car tattoo and legos by horus8
15 Jan 2003, 2:34 AM
Excuse my ignorance, who is Aston Kirchner? And again, excuse my ignorance, what's Michael Bulgakov done that reletes to me at all?
Besides that, is this in reply to 'Ode to Dark Angel' Or my dream involving you?
Good, untill the last line, which I read as a mistake futhur and thoght it siad 'Know my piano' that woulda been hilarious.
Wow. Your ryming jim with jim....
shows how much talent you have.
Have I offended you? If so, it was purely intentional. Fuck off and die you stinking piece of crap.
I'm in a university library. I'll probably be thrown out for displaying that many obscenities.
Did you paste, or write each one by hand. Sixpence a week for cheek, Mr. Morel!
Awesome poem it reeks of grief and your perception of the world, the irony, the injustified fate of life, the weakness of mortality and the decadence of frustration, sarcasm, boredom, the ending is a crescendo of turmoil- I fucking loved this have a 9, i am off to pound my head against a corkscrew listening to 'everbody hurts'
Makes me think of a depeche mode song, 'and i dont want to start any blasphemous rumours but i think that god has a sick sense of humour and when i die i expect to find him laughing' -liked the end of this and the ideas behind it, you have your own little world full of overpopulated thoughts - cool -8
boring compared to the other 2 i just commented on, but then i again i dont really get it. -5-
liked the 'carry on' film references to your ideas of the 2 types of people, and you wove the end quite nicely, not really my shot of vodka but still liked downing it in one. Your work is always polished i'll give you that Mr J. *8*
Also, were you intending I vote for this?
Out of curiosity, why is his head seperated from his body? Surely that's gonna hurt...
No, he chewed it off.
And by the way, he does mean to offend everybody. Especially you.
Funny poem, though.
Fabulous! Psychedelic Butterflies will remember this in one of our songs!!!! Wheeee!!!!! Heeheeheehee!
I like this so much it may have a ten! Foom!!
I like Catatonia.
No, the question was *who*?
Yes, this works.