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god'swife on insomnia by Bill Z Bub 14 Jan 2003, 4:13 PM
Our bodies shall meet over such a dish.
horus8 on some deleted poem 14 Jan 2003, 5:29 PM
"Her crimson scythe of violence" you always make me chuckle uncontrolably you are a total romantic softy. You must of read this outloud and known these guys were going to tear you up on this piece? It's to big of a target not to.
poetandknowit on some deleted poem 14 Jan 2003, 10:30 PM
Wow. Just, wow.
gay on some deleted poem 14 Jan 2003, 4:34 PM
roll with it, man
horus8 on some deleted poem 14 Jan 2003, 4:58 PM
jesus. you didn't.
horus8 on The Poem of an Eighth-Grader by jessicazee 14 Jan 2003, 5:00 PM
also weedy.
horus8 on Hidden by tbeach84 14 Jan 2003, 5:07 PM
soul banging is always a delightful past time activity..that, and cannulas. lol. ah the turmoil of asexuala. facinating...like learning how to play the tuba in a marching band.
ChunkyHunkyMonkey on A world of many faces by dantron 14 Jan 2003, 5:23 PM
k its aight but um im not understading it very much sorry bout dat but oh well its all good right u still get pts
ChunkyHunkyMonkey on some deleted poem 14 Jan 2003, 5:30 PM
DAMN not bad i really like dis poem its pretty good as a matter a fact dis does deserve high pts
ChunkyHunkyMonkey on lost love by cherish 14 Jan 2003, 5:36 PM
DAMN DIS IS WELL WRITTEN POEM NO DOUBT OF A 10 IF I COULD I WILL GO HIGHER BUT I CANT SORRY
INTRANSIT on some deleted poem 14 Jan 2003, 6:33 PM
Funny, I find (deep-throated) obscene. but not (whore). I think you could kick this up to classy if you wanted. 2 dings
INTRANSIT on The Poem of an Eighth-Grader by jessicazee 14 Jan 2003, 6:35 PM
Middle school genius.
INTRANSIT on Skin on My Soup by jessicazee 14 Jan 2003, 6:37 PM
TOO fun. WAAAAAAAY too fun.
Tintagiles on One by adrenalize 14 Jan 2003, 7:37 PM
Oh shut up.
Tintagiles on some deleted poem 14 Jan 2003, 7:40 PM
Get rid of the exclamation mark. Otherwise lovely.
Tintagiles on some deleted poem 14 Jan 2003, 7:41 PM
You keep writing things I wish I'd written. Stop it, damn you. Again, shades upon shades of Guillevic.
poetandknowit on some deleted poem 14 Jan 2003, 10:24 PM
You should go away and menstruate more often. And put my poem back up. I do not have a copy. I need a memory of our fling.
poetandknowit on The Golden Rule by Quarton 14 Jan 2003, 10:39 PM
The first sentence reminded me of this horrid children's book my daughter loves. "Cautiously, the zebra wanders across the plain Playfully, the giraffes dance and play in the water Determinedly, the cheetah seeks his prey." AAAHHHHH Not to say this poem is horrid, it is just all about god this and not god that and after awhile the spiritual quest or the finding of comfort in the lack of spiritual quest is tiresome. Of course, every writer goes through it at some point. It was just the starting sentence, the adverbial clause, reminding me of that horrid book where the clauses fill each page, and the pictures cannot ease the pain of hearing my voice read those sentences. The horror. Sorry. Carry on.
poetandknowit on some deleted poem 14 Jan 2003, 10:53 PM
Auster and Levertov, in my opinion, are his best translators. Of course, you can read him native. Quite interesting. Was this a quicke, or written over the study break?
god'swife on Good to the Last Drop by Bonehiss 14 Jan 2003, 4:03 PM
Hate the titled. Mrs. Folgers and all that. We share a word. Weren't you once some other name?